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| "Constellations of the Pained Souls" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^mir^yes she loves me&only me.look im in a fic*dances around*she loves me yeah yeah yeah she loves me umpf[y]take singing lessons^mir^ur just jealous(k)im a drunk?{s}hey what happened to me?:me:ive got you babe+san+u ppl r weird. mir u better stay away from Lady Saki K^mir^uhuh@_@ +san+u lecher(k)uve always known it san he cant help himself{s}she didnt write about me[y]get over urself.at least she cares about u:me:she likes u yash its just she likes sess&mir more{s}she didnt write about me(k)stop being so vain sho +san+ur one to talk ur in all of them:me:oh cat fight.calm down san its just a story and you know kag^mir&y sit&watch^[y]ive got 50 on kag^mir^ive got 100 on my san *san&kag glare at the guys* @_@:me:o boy here it goes*giggles*look at what u started saki.poor sess is down but i'll console him later.^mir inches over to computer^saki my dear dear sweetie:me:uh mir i think u better leave the puter alone b4 san catches u +san+too late^mir^@_@:me:i like the story kag a drunk hehehe(k)hey:me:well its getting to be new year so its allowed.so is it kag that only remembers?{s}duh she knew who he was b4 he told her:me:go back 2 ur sulking love im talking to saki{s}fine im taking the icecream&toppings to my room:me:its my room&save me some for later{s}*mutters*go finish ur potter story&sev wench&let me be:me:now now love leave hp alone&leave severus out of this.men!u can have him for a while if u want!new chappie soon merry xmas&happ | Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 18:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi. The beginning seems a bit slow, but I'm guessing that the story will start to pick up the place. :) It was amusing to read that Kagome feel I think asleep during their talk.
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