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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 01:54 CST
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::snifflers:: That was beautiful. I'm a little sad Zechs had to die but hey I love all the GW boys equally. Still a damn good story, keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 23:04 CST
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*big smile* that was a nice ending, though I had hoped that Duo would've had some part in Zechs demise, ya know a little personal vengence on all the hurt, the lost of his family and pack/tribe because of Zechs' dominance quest. *hugs you*
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Reviewed By: WickedGame [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 19:19 CST
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ah, another one ended. nice ending too.
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 19:56 CST
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Aw... the sweetness of the love... and his father is so stupid!!!!!!! Write more now!!!!!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 01:56 CST
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I agree with Heero, they are being put on display when their movements or actions if they were two of the same species would have not been so eye catching. I think that's something that he will have to get used to. hmm So they've truly mated...*blush* anyways i love your stories.. *chuckles* I know you probably hear that lots, but I can't help saying it. Happy turkey day.
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Title: ^______________^
Reviewed By: Sandileina [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 10:28 CST
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I think this may be one of my favourite fics of all time. I'm so glad you updated it!! ^_^ It's not quite as dark as a few of your fics, which is a nice change. Don't get me wrong, I adore angst-ness, but it's nice to have variety, right? ^^ Aww, poor Duo, being bitten. Does Heero have fangs and the like? o.0 I'm sure it says something about his teeth in one of the chapters... Or that might just be my weird imagination... *shrugs* I don't know. And, to round off my rambly review (alliteration! XD) I shall honour the tradition of saying, 'Please update soon!' ~Sandy~
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 13, 2005 13:57 CDT
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 13, 2005 13:49 CDT Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I wish I could write more but I'm in a hurry.My Mom is sick and I have to go stay with her ..So I'm doing a mass review and I'm sorry if this is posted in more than 1 chapter of your story, But like I said I am in a hurry ...I have read your story or story' and enjoyed It or them and can't wait till your next update. So Please update again soon so I can read more...
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Reviewed By: Rude02 not sighned in On: September 07, 2005 01:06 CDT
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Well spank me rosy! *_+ what a fight! Can't believe you off'd Une, aaaw gial.
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: September 05, 2005 15:22 CDT
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Excellent action!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 16:49 CDT
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Yea!!! Duo's back.. but all his innocence is gone?!... so J didn't....*gags* he couldn't have?! Please say it isn't so... *sniffles* meidaminer didn't send me the notice that you updated *whines* what's happening?! pooh anyways update soon, real soon ok?
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 16:36 CDT
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*growls* Mediaminer didn't send me the update email?! what's going on?! Well any way that was a good chapter, and my eyes stretched and my heart despaired at Zechs' words of '...I'll show you.' It seems obvious that Zechs isn't THAT against mounting another male were in *private* even though he's calling Duo misguided. Maybe Zechs knows more about Duo's origins because he coud have just killed Duo, captured Heero and got another son to represent the clan... hmm, unless Zechs is attracted to him... ~shrugs~ I wondre how Heero will react to the smell that will obviously be on Duo and Duo will probably be distraught over what happen if he can't get to a watering hole and wash it off. More please!!!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 24, 2005 23:58 CDT
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 24, 2005 23:26 CDT Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I can't find the words to say just how great this story is .So I just thought I would rate it a perfect 10..Please update. I just love your stories
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Reviewed By: Rude02 not signed in On: July 04, 2005 13:13 CDT
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I am worried about Wufei... Everybody is paired up and someone got their backs' when they make it into the high grass, but... Wu. Fatefull friend/ex-servant, dunno...
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 19:57 CDT
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I've never read it described that way before... it sounds... warm to say the least. Continue, please
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 07:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay for the perverted were-lions and were-wolves everywhere!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 05:34 CDT
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*smiles* shame on Tro for thinking naughty things with a wiggling KittyQuat. *snickers* Wahoo!! Wuffers is going help out and Heero's not well. Well luckily, wuffers will get Tro and Q to to put a cap on their uh sexual arousal to each other, keep them focused because if Heero could scent them then Une did too, unless Heero and Duo were still scenting in their contentment in lying with each other and that would block her noise Or she decided to ignore scents until Heero and Duo separated? *shrugs* more story please!
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Title: Rocky Roads
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 21:21 CDT
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How bittersweet that through all the cruelty, Heero and Duo behave like lovers whenever they can get close enough. Heero's already sacrificed everything for Duo - how far will Duo go for Heero? I love Wufei's perfect sense of timing and dedication! Is he going to pull the stick out of his ass regarding Duo, though?
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Reviewed By: priscel--- On: April 26, 2005 19:24 CDT
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atleast she doesn't know about Quat and Trowakins. I wonder what she means when she says that Duo was acting strangely? Was it that he was acting more bodly than being the fearful cub he had been when she had first captured him? more please.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: April 24, 2005 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story ... Yuor such a great writer...
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Reviewed By: kimpisces(not signed in) On: April 24, 2005 08:51 CDT
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uh oh...things are going to go very well if Heero is enprisoned to...*shakes her head* I wonder how Duo's going to react to this new development? Something tells me that he may not go along willingly with someone who ties up his ....friend/mate/whatever.....I mean, seriously. Though prehaps the reasons Une captured Heero was to ensure that Duo would follow them all the way home because he'd have to in order to ensure Heero's safety. Wow, what a twist! Well, update soon, I wanna know where this one is going ^-^ ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great stuff. I *really* love this fic. The description of scent, and the sensations of fur, adds an extra dimension that makes it very compelling, and extremely real. And I think that you're doing a great job combining animal nature and human emotion. Probably the most erotic 1x2 GW you've written, to my mind, and I love and re-read each and every one of them. And they haven't even done anything yet! Thanks heaps for a wonderful story!^_^
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Reviewed By: priscel--- On: April 04, 2005 02:30 CDT
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Whoa Heero!! I wish he had a chance to talk it over with G but that can't be helped. I think as soon as Wuffers has his scratches taken care of, and informed G of what Heero said, since he seriously didn't believe that relena-girl is with pup, he'll be coming after heero to support him. Is Duo a pride prince? And Zechs knew all along and didn't want the cub to be present as a threat to his plans for their clan/pride? And whoa, were they scenting that bad!!! *snickers* next time they'll make sure that where ever they are umm getting a bit frisky, they'll do it downwind. *smiles*
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Title: whoa
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 10:54 CST
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this is GREAT plz keep going i hate cliffies ( screams ) plz keep going ( thumbs up )
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 17:53 CST
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*Throws a Hissy-fit* AIIIIIEEEE!!!! How evil!!!! You can't leave it there!!! . . . Hee, hee, hee. ^.^; I like how you've brought Relena into this. The role of peacemaker is obviously perfect for her. But then Heero would have to marry her, wouldn't he? Can't wait to see how that works out. Grrrrrr!!! You give us a taste of an oohh sooo tantalyzing lemon, and then spoil the mood . . . SHAME ON YOU GRRRRR!!! ^____^ LOL. You know I was just beginning to wonder where the heck Wu Fei was, when he burst on the scene just in the knick of time. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ~Wanders off to die until chapter is updated~
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 08:48 CST
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Oh right...one more thing...I don't know if you're aware of this or not but the first part of your chapter posted itself again at the bottom ...it was kinda weird but *Shrugs* mm.org does that to me all the time *curses weird posting* Just thought you'd like to know so you could fix it ^-^ ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 08:46 CST
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Damn it! They were just starting to get nice and hot and then BAM! Some guy comes and tries to kill them...I have a question though..*coughs* was Wufei watching them ?? *tries not to laugh* I mean seriously, how else would have just happen to be there in time to save them? *shrugs* meh, I guess that's not the point! I love this fanfic though, I think it's absolutely brillant! I can't wait for you to update! I also have a feeling though that it might be a little awkward between Heero and Duo after that...*snickers* Update soon ^-^ ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 06:00 CST
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*smiles* The two pups have scented each other, they are definitely interested in each other. Shoot Heero should give into his urge to pounce on Duo and rub noses, sniff and lick eachother *cough* Duo will, based on how he behaved when heero came witht the food, more than likely avoid or try his best avoid Heero eventhough he's supposed to be HUNTING... leaning how to anyway and not waiting for the food Heero brings... *beams* more please!
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 20:00 CST
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*Squeals Incessantly* YIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! ^o^ OMG! What an awesome concept. This had me hooked right away. I just LURV the sexual tension. Heero and Duo are so cute and naive!! *Pounces 1x2* Hee Hee! ^___^ I really like Wu fei, especially your description of his apearence. It sounds sooo kewl!! (So does everyone else, but Wuffles sounds the kewlest ^.~) *Glomps Quatre* Hee Hee! He's soo cute. ^_^ I like how you made Trowa and Quatre different species. *Gives Thumbs Up* Very kewl. Can't wait to see Heero court Duo! *Giggles Manically* Update soon! ~Wanders off to sqeaul some more ^o^ lolol!!~
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Reviewed By: Terry Maxwell On: March 04, 2005 19:58 CST
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n_n i just need to tell you that i love you.... ahh it's so much furry cuteness... i need moooree...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: March 03, 2005 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this .Thanks for writing it so I could read it and enjoy it. Please write more....sorry it took so long to review.
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