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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 05:34 CDT
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*smiles* shame on Tro for thinking naughty things with a wiggling KittyQuat. *snickers* Wahoo!! Wuffers is going help out and Heero's not well. Well luckily, wuffers will get Tro and Q to to put a cap on their uh sexual arousal to each other, keep them focused because if Heero could scent them then Une did too, unless Heero and Duo were still scenting in their contentment in lying with each other and that would block her noise Or she decided to ignore scents until Heero and Duo separated? *shrugs* more story please!
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Title: Rocky Roads
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 21:21 CDT
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How bittersweet that through all the cruelty, Heero and Duo behave like lovers whenever they can get close enough. Heero's already sacrificed everything for Duo - how far will Duo go for Heero? I love Wufei's perfect sense of timing and dedication! Is he going to pull the stick out of his ass regarding Duo, though?
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Reviewed By: priscel--- On: April 26, 2005 19:24 CDT
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atleast she doesn't know about Quat and Trowakins. I wonder what she means when she says that Duo was acting strangely? Was it that he was acting more bodly than being the fearful cub he had been when she had first captured him? more please.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: April 24, 2005 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story ... Yuor such a great writer...
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Reviewed By: kimpisces(not signed in) On: April 24, 2005 08:51 CDT
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uh oh...things are going to go very well if Heero is enprisoned to...*shakes her head* I wonder how Duo's going to react to this new development? Something tells me that he may not go along willingly with someone who ties up his ....friend/mate/whatever.....I mean, seriously. Though prehaps the reasons Une captured Heero was to ensure that Duo would follow them all the way home because he'd have to in order to ensure Heero's safety. Wow, what a twist! Well, update soon, I wanna know where this one is going ^-^ ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great stuff. I *really* love this fic. The description of scent, and the sensations of fur, adds an extra dimension that makes it very compelling, and extremely real. And I think that you're doing a great job combining animal nature and human emotion. Probably the most erotic 1x2 GW you've written, to my mind, and I love and re-read each and every one of them. And they haven't even done anything yet! Thanks heaps for a wonderful story!^_^
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Reviewed By: priscel--- On: April 04, 2005 02:30 CDT
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Whoa Heero!! I wish he had a chance to talk it over with G but that can't be helped. I think as soon as Wuffers has his scratches taken care of, and informed G of what Heero said, since he seriously didn't believe that relena-girl is with pup, he'll be coming after heero to support him. Is Duo a pride prince? And Zechs knew all along and didn't want the cub to be present as a threat to his plans for their clan/pride? And whoa, were they scenting that bad!!! *snickers* next time they'll make sure that where ever they are umm getting a bit frisky, they'll do it downwind. *smiles*
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Title: whoa
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 10:54 CST
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this is GREAT plz keep going i hate cliffies ( screams ) plz keep going ( thumbs up )
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 17:53 CST
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*Throws a Hissy-fit* AIIIIIEEEE!!!! How evil!!!! You can't leave it there!!! . . . Hee, hee, hee. ^.^; I like how you've brought Relena into this. The role of peacemaker is obviously perfect for her. But then Heero would have to marry her, wouldn't he? Can't wait to see how that works out. Grrrrrr!!! You give us a taste of an oohh sooo tantalyzing lemon, and then spoil the mood . . . SHAME ON YOU GRRRRR!!! ^____^ LOL. You know I was just beginning to wonder where the heck Wu Fei was, when he burst on the scene just in the knick of time. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ~Wanders off to die until chapter is updated~
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 08:48 CST
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Oh right...one more thing...I don't know if you're aware of this or not but the first part of your chapter posted itself again at the bottom ...it was kinda weird but *Shrugs* mm.org does that to me all the time *curses weird posting* Just thought you'd like to know so you could fix it ^-^ ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 08:46 CST
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Damn it! They were just starting to get nice and hot and then BAM! Some guy comes and tries to kill them...I have a question though..*coughs* was Wufei watching them ?? *tries not to laugh* I mean seriously, how else would have just happen to be there in time to save them? *shrugs* meh, I guess that's not the point! I love this fanfic though, I think it's absolutely brillant! I can't wait for you to update! I also have a feeling though that it might be a little awkward between Heero and Duo after that...*snickers* Update soon ^-^ ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 06:00 CST
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*smiles* The two pups have scented each other, they are definitely interested in each other. Shoot Heero should give into his urge to pounce on Duo and rub noses, sniff and lick eachother *cough* Duo will, based on how he behaved when heero came witht the food, more than likely avoid or try his best avoid Heero eventhough he's supposed to be HUNTING... leaning how to anyway and not waiting for the food Heero brings... *beams* more please!
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 20:00 CST
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*Squeals Incessantly* YIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! ^o^ OMG! What an awesome concept. This had me hooked right away. I just LURV the sexual tension. Heero and Duo are so cute and naive!! *Pounces 1x2* Hee Hee! ^___^ I really like Wu fei, especially your description of his apearence. It sounds sooo kewl!! (So does everyone else, but Wuffles sounds the kewlest ^.~) *Glomps Quatre* Hee Hee! He's soo cute. ^_^ I like how you made Trowa and Quatre different species. *Gives Thumbs Up* Very kewl. Can't wait to see Heero court Duo! *Giggles Manically* Update soon! ~Wanders off to sqeaul some more ^o^ lolol!!~
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Reviewed By: Terry Maxwell On: March 04, 2005 19:58 CST
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n_n i just need to tell you that i love you.... ahh it's so much furry cuteness... i need moooree...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: March 03, 2005 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this .Thanks for writing it so I could read it and enjoy it. Please write more....sorry it took so long to review.
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