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| "Love Hina Continued" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Insane1
Reviewed By: Insane1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, fairly good. In the next chapter though, try re-reading your work before posting it to make sure it runs smoothly when read and work on the grammer a bit. Also, try not to make things seem so... flat. I'm sorry if I sound mean, just trying to be constructive! ^_^ I'll cheek back later to see if you took my advise, I hope you decide to!
| Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: Angel_Taken428 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, it's the best continuation of Love Hina yet. Keep it up, but one thing I found is that it was a bit too short, so next time start writing longer. Anyways, nice job and well done. I'll be checking back often. Thx
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