Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow...intresting mix of lemons. greatly written and i really think you handeled InuYasha watching the two very well...and of course, it had to be there. only thing better would have been Miroku but he wouldn't have stayed in the bushes. how did kag not think it was yash though...then agian, he never did follow them in teh series. i really think you did a great job with the story, not stretching the characters of of thier roles. excellent job.
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