Reviewed By: TheVegasQueen On: January 25, 2005 01:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww... That's a very heartbreaking story. See, I've never ACTUALLY read a Goku/Chi Chi story because I hate her! hahaha no no, I really do. But you do such a fine job of describing their relationship, keeping them both in character and following a realistic storyline that I couldn't help but find this fascinating and enjoyable. You ought to be a psychiatrist with how well you seemed to have disected both their characters making them seem more humane then I've ever come across. And that's a huge accomplishment when you've kept them in character. I LOVED your description of "reason" (and I hate songfics by the way)... The reason for everything. I thought that was just.. amazing and very poetic. That he thought of her when he held the world on his shoulders and that enemies didn't seem so scary in comparison to her! hahaha. A few laughs in there as well. "Whats the point in waking up in the morning only to cry every night?" That REALLY struck me and I had to nod that JUST being alive wasn't enough. I always think of Chi Chi as selfish in her demands of him but the way you portrayed it, it doesn't always seem she was asking that much. A very beautiful, heartbreaking tale. Very well done. Oh, and thank you VERY much for reviewing Monster. I always appreciate it even if we aren't review junkies! hahah Love Camaro
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