| "Crescent Moon On The Brow Of The Sky" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: there came a point where it no longer mattered if i had crossed a line... i couldn't find it beneath the sand
Reviewed By: thesoulcollector [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the most beautiful thing i have ever read im utterly speechless wow (well maybe semispeechless) hey umm can i ask if you know why singlesparks going insane? firespinner@msn.com im in awe of your talent ****************************************** As a writer it is my job to Create a character Get him stuck in a tree Throw rocks at him Get him down Then start over - much love thesoulcollector
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 21:34 CDT
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Well, I think I liked the last version better. But go with what you feel leads you on. Well, hope you update soon, I do like this story. Orginal and fresh.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 09:10 CST
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Once again, I'm am struck by your poetic turn of phrase. The stark descriptions of surroundings and emotions are facinating. Kagome's longing for home and her heartache over InuYasha's death had a rawness to it. Very nicely done. Your two villians, Hitsumaru & Tsusimaru are completely dispicable...as they should be. And was that...could it be...a little fond regard in Sess' eyes before the mask slid back into place? Yes, it looks like the Spring is on its way. LoL -- Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Miko_Snow Godess_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Thanx for telling me about your new chappy being here. This is a really great story and I love to read it. Sry I can't rave about it more but I'm trying to hurry and get all my e-mails read b/4 I have to get off. But keep up the great work, and thanks again for taking the time to let me know about the new chappy!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 14:23 CST
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Well that was unexpected. Who would have thought that others had left the message. So when will Sesshoumaru let his stoic facade down. I just know it is all an act. No one as cold as he acts would jump to her rescue just because she called his name. Course I wonder if he just did that because she now belongs to him. You know the whole dog dominance thing. Hope you update again soon, later.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 00:06 CST
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This is a great story. I just wonder how far did Sesshoumaru travel from Kagome's body to Inuyasha's. Cause they are sure taking forever to get back there now that Kagome is alive. Just a question. Hope you can update soon. later.
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Reviewed By: Kayashi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow! you have a very unique quality for writing. I love how you describe with such detail. i can almost see what the scene looks like. in fact i sketched a picture for the scene where sesshomaru brings kagome back to life. i love this story! update soon.
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Title: Tried to review, It wouldn't let me...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 12:46 CST
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You probably didn't get many reviews here because you posted during a very difficult time while Mmorg changed servers. Everything went haywire! --- Your writing style has a surreal quality that is quite unique. The stark imagery and bold emotions, or lack of emotion, is riveting. I hope that Sango and Miroku remember that there is more to life than revenge. -- Sesshoumaru, with his imitation of a walking glacier and his low opinion of humans, contradicts himself with his constant care of Rin. Kagome is completely devastated over InuYasha's death (who can blame her?) She may have found some backbone upon witnessing Kikyou's death, maybe remembering how the misfortunate Miko never backed down from anyone, and she is trying to keep up with the enigmatic TaiYoukai even though she doesn't know his plans. How can Sesshoumaru's indifferance ever compare to InuYasha's passion? How can this Youkai Lord's contempt for humans measure up to the brash Hanyou's selflessness in sacrificing his own safety to protect others, even people he didn't know? -- IMO, unless the mighty Sess thaws a little, the most he will recieve from Kagome is her respect. I'm surprised she's not trying to find some way to the well...to the loving arms of her family...away from all the grief. --- Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 22:15 CST
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Very, very interesting. Strangly dark and forbidding. InuYasha dead...tragic. Your Sesshoumaru is coldly contemptuous, moreso than usual. I'm intrigued as to where your taking this story. Nicely done.
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