| "Mark of The Beast" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: ryutaiyouki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
htis has got to be the best eva fan fic i've read i want to see more of your work if you have any.
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Title: Nice work
Reviewed By: Ravenz2008 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story so far. I think the idea is creative and puts the series in a new light. One of the only problems I can find so far, is the in the grammer and spelling. Many verbs are in the wrong tenses and other things like that. That aside, keep everything how it is. -Raven
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