| "Changing is Inevitable" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: RogueTiger910 On: September 10, 2005 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story has an original story plot and a good details but your chapters are abit short and apart from that the story is going good but you haven't updated in quite a while so you better hurry up and post a new chapter to get more revies weither positive or negative.
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Reviewed By: Kaioth2015 On: September 10, 2005 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sparkle in eyes* wow this is so COOL!!! But you should really hurry up and add a chapter and speed up the relationship between Kagome and Sesshomaru cause I mean people gotta be in suspence plus you lose reviwers like that and the ratings of the story go downhill... anyway update soon! ^.^
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Reviewed By: darks_lil_pet On: September 10, 2005 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude this rocks!!! It was recommended by one of my buddies Hayashi Panthera she said that it was one of the best stories she'd ever read so i checked it out and she was right! ^^ anyway you should really update on this story!!!
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Reviewed By: mrspotts On: September 10, 2005 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ilike the idea, its really cool!
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Reviewed By: Shiori_Baka(nsi) On: July 01, 2005 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why are you just posting it on fanfiction.net its a vary good story and i can never get to fanfiction.net you should post it on both or just mediaminer.org i realy want to read the reast on mediaminer.org not i repet NOT on fanfiction.org i really like your fanfic. you shuold not stop your storys at mediaminer.org. if you do i will be really sad and probably hunt you down and make you keep up dateing on mediaminer.org....... PLEASE KEEP UPDATEING ON MEDIAMINER.ORG please .prety please with every thing on top.....
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 10:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good, please update.
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Reviewed By: Hayashi aka Hayashi Panthera On: February 20, 2005 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update this is going so well and im one of your faithful reviewers so update for all of us reviewers please?
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Reviewed By: Hayashi Panthera [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update sooner!!! You should really make your chapters longer. And the scoring above is for chapter 11.
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Reviewed By: Yushi On: February 07, 2005 00:16 CST
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You hafta make some more chapters! This story is so much fun! But I really want to know why InuYasha is so stupid in it. One, his senses are really weak. And two, he follows Kikyo around like a lovesick puppy, while she is a total jerk to everyone around her. Doesnt he notice?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: Hayashi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE continue I really want to find out what happens next. So far the story has been really good . A few spelling errors but apart from that the story is superb.
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very good, but you should work on your grammar and spelling.
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER, On: February 01, 2005 01:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story!! I like it so much it's on my fav list and I look forward to your updates. Just so you know, if you quit with this story and not end it, you're gonna have one angry fanfic momma on your hands (or on your website ^_^!)) Any who, I think you should continue, I'd really like to see more of your writing!! ~INUKAGLOVER
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Reviewed By: Dark Soul On: January 29, 2005 09:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!! Cant wait for the ball!! Please update!!
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Reviewed By: ladyg On: January 12, 2005 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story. I can't wait until they're at the ball. Please update soon
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really great story! its a little fast-paced though. lol one request...dunt make inu ALL THAT evil! this is like, the FIRST sess/kag story that i have EVER liked! its really awesome. make kikyou more evil..ER! =D hope you update soon!
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