| "Yoshi Chronicles: Lizard Hazard" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Captivating...
Reviewed By: Random One On: May 19, 2005 08:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a great author. I loved this chapter, it had a sense of calm that I haven't yet seen in any other story I've read. Then again, I haven't read very many...At any rate, keep up the good work. You truly stand out from the crowd.
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Title: Fascinating...
Reviewed By: Random One On: May 19, 2005 08:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I noticed some errors...Probably made from the computer cutting off words. Anyway, I liked this chapter. It was fun to read. Also, I like the idea of the story in RPG style. Very unique.
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Reviewed By: Queen Breeza [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter Two was nice. No violence, worries. Keep it up! Hmmm...no errors...
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Title: About the thing at the bottom...
Reviewed By: PKMNTrainerMusashi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 16:51 CST
Comment/Review:
I have no idea what the 'converting blah blah blah' thing is about...so I just ignored it. All I can say about it is that it didn't show up while I was typing it. ^-^;; Anyway, I hope you enjoyed the story so far!
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Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: Queen Breeza [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was pretty good. A couple of grammatical errors were in it, but it didn't take away from the overall story. I love reading Yoshi stories! Especially if they are all about him. Keep it up! I'd love to read more! Queen Breeza
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Title: keep goin'
Reviewed By: I'm not giving my name to a computer On: February 12, 2005 02:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I SO enjoyed your first chapter...please tell me you can continue it?! CONTINUE! *holds up a ransom note* If you ever want to see your 9insert random important item here0 again, continue the story!........please?
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Title: Error
Reviewed By: PKMNTrainerMusashi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 15:56 CST
Comment/Review:
There seems to be an error that says "This author only takes reviews from registered members" or something like that. Please note that I have checked my profile, and did not uncheck the box that says "allows anonymous reviewers". I apologize for this inconvenience, and I humbly request that you continue to try to review. If you cannot, then email me your review at: Hiroshihoshi14@aol.com Thanks and keep reading! ^-^
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