| "Happily Ever After" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: ^__^
Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awesome. I hope you make a sequel to it.
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 18:21 CST
Comment/Review:
That was really cool. You should write more stories. But not one-shots I don't because I don't like them. Can you make more stories, but like crossovers or something?
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Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 18:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that is was very, very good considering it was a one-shot. I like fan fics that have the two people gradually fall in love. I don't like when they fall in love to quick. But I guess that's what you have to do on a one-shot. Oh yeah, two things I thought were dumb in your fic. First of all I diddn't like how she became a wherewolf after falling through that portal. I mean, how is that even possible?! And second of all, since she was a wherewolf, you should have made something in the fic happen because of that. It was like she was a wherewolf...and that's it. There should have been some conflict within the story involving that. But overall I applaude you!
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