| "Understand" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: shadowtraced [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2009 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very enjoyable and sweet. I liked how you wrote about Vegeta's fear of being hurt due to him letting his guard down.
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Reviewed By: SonSofia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Darn, Vegeta is so cute and Goku is so loving and sweet. I wish I were Vegeta or Goku, whatever. Nicely done, I liked the fact that it was short and simple because there was no need for it to be drawn out longer.
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Reviewed By: Arianrhod [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 18:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read this story years ago (and now re-reading it realise I never commented!) and still think it's amazing. It's so sweet and emotional and just... lovely. :)
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Reviewed By: PageTurn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, how fantastic.
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Reviewed By: Arashi L On: March 29, 2006 22:24 CST
Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the emotion you put into this story. Internal struggles have more depth, and I liked that you had Goku smiling and talking to convince Vegeta instead of using force. This story gave me just the shot of emotion I wanted. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: 68435 On: January 22, 2005 22:54 CST
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it's a really cute story. I'm not sure if you're finishing it there, but if you are, don't. You don't even have to NC17, but the conflict isn't resolved yet. Why is Vegeta afraid? what will happen next- he doesn't just overcome his fear right there does he? Update / sequel
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Reviewed By: Tari Helyanwe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 21:05 CST
Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story! I'm not really a fan of goku/vegeta pairings, but your story changed my mind! Maybe u shud consider making this a full on story...keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 04:32 CST
Comment/Review:
*crosses fingers and toes* Please, mm.org, lemme be able to review this time. It's a Christmas wish from a lil Jewish gal. Please. Here goes review: LOVELY, PIXELGODDESS. Our Veg has such trust issues and I like how you explore those.
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