| "In the shadows" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: tres_quatorze [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You absolutely have to continue with this fic. It is amazing. I haven't ever read manys where people get into Schwarz a lot, and this fic just reeled me in. The way everything was paced and written, and the reactions everyone had were realllly good. Please continue to update!!
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Reviewed By: kato-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 12:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. That 'aya pouncing on ken' scene caught me completely by surprise. Well-done! I want more!!!
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Reviewed By: kato-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 11:17 CST
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Awesome chapter. Nice to see the events from Omi's point of view. But now I want to see what happens next and if Youji and Schu will get it on :) I'm all for that. and can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: kato-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 15:59 CST
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I like where this story is going. gonna be a YoujixSchu? those are so rare and I haven't read one in what seems like forever. It's okay if this is a BradxSchu as well. I enjoy both of those combos.
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Reviewed By: Cierzo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 19:03 CST
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I really like your style, I just wanted to tell you that, and that I've enjoyed your fic. If possible, I'd like to read a sequel someday, because your story poses too many questions that I would be glad to have answered. Great use of the details to give realism to the fic. Please, write on.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, I'm glad you took the time to write it down and post it right away. A terrific Christmas present for your readers. It works well as a one-shot, but with enough dangling threads that could merit other stories. All characters in character, with wonderful hints to their inner turmoil -- Aya's hesitation, Ken's longing . . . Thank you again!
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