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| "Silent Night...I Think Not!" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Lucamin On: February 14, 2005 02:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ahhh, Mokie's *soooo* cute! Heh, but Seto and Jou are even cuter!!
| Title: I’m sorry I didn’t review this sooner. . .
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: February 08, 2005 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's the story so nice, I read it twice! I loved it! So cute, lots of comedy, insane Tea/Anzu, and so on. Ah, there were lots of good moments, think we'll see Kaiba in that leather get-up in Insomniac *Not-so-subtle-hint*? I liked the idea of him wearing Kohl, and the ear ring, and the choker. Loved how hentai Bakura was, and the general sneakiness of Mokuba (that's our Mokie, following in his big brother's manipulative shoes), and the singing. It makes me wonder what you have planned next in Insomniac *2nd not-so-subtle-hint*. Well, until next time, Good Luck!
| Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 08:54 CST
Comment/Review:
aaaaaaaaah, that was sweet. I just loved how mean/caring Mokuba is. I'd like to know how Yami's gonna survive Tea though. Anyways, I thought it was a good story, it's nicely written and Bakura made me laugh. Oh gosh, I can almost see the scene when the Yami's get their own body's. *smirks evilly*
| Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 08:54 CST
Comment/Review:
aaaaaaaaah, that was sweet. I just loved how mean/caring Mokuba is. I'd like to know how Yami's gonna survive Tea though. Anyways, I thought it was a good story, it's nicely written and Bakura made me laugh. Oh gosh, I can almost see the scene when the Yami's get their own body's. *smirks evilly*
| Title: =P
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! It's the feared Deme! Err.. what a sweet little Christmas story. I know you had such fun writing it and I had A LOT of fun betaing. I'm sorry you did win the contest, but we still won, no? It's like you say, we make a good team. I'm favoriting this, 'cause I like it so much. And because this is your second story to make it into my favorites, you will now be one of my FEW favorite authors. w00t! Lol.. I make it sound all great. =P I love you Beth, good job! Oh and props to you again for being able to take critiques and mold them to fit the story. That's good for an author, or ANYONE who creates. =)
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