| "As Long as I Have Friends" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: 4
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 13:02 CST
Comment/Review:
that was Good wonder what the Hokage is gonna say to Hyuuga Sr.?? Great chapter...THANKS:D
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Title: 3
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 09:44 CST
Comment/Review:
LOL...but YIKES...poor Hinata that sucked that her dad kicked her out...I hope Naruto put the pictures away or else Hinata is in for a bit of a surpirse...LOL...they are both having terrible days but I still think that Hinata got the worse of the 2...Great chapter...THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: Vashbfg On: March 08, 2005 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice one man, do ur best to keep it going, oh and and if u need a beta reader just ask, good luck and good writing
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Title: 2
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 00:55 CST
Comment/Review:
I hope you continue this soon cause man oh man I can't wait to see their reactions to the blackmail...MWA HAHAHA!!! and I loved that evil grins and then Sasuke's evil SMIRK...XCELLENT:D
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Title: 1
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 00:49 CST
Comment/Review:
LOL that was GOOD...hehehe Poor GUYS they should know better...oh well hehehe live and learn:D
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 12:06 CST
Comment/Review:
i didn't understand what was going on, what did the book say.
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Title: kewl
Reviewed By: Inuyasha is a total hotty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
asume update soon pwez. I love it and oh yes....I THE FIRST O YAH! *ahem* like I was saying I love this story and would aprechiate(sp srry) if youd do i quickly but yes I know it's hard and I am dreadfuly ashamed for complining since I haven't completeed any of my story';s. *sigh* o yes nd may I ask if maybe just maybe you could read some of my story's and maybe review it would mean the world to me Peace out IIATH
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