Title: .
Reviewed By: . On: May 19, 2005 12:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eh, it's okay. I found it kind of annoying that every couple of sentences there was a japanese phrase. I prefer only using the suffixes, and occasionally 'kobito'. So I suggest you put some sort of glossary or take out the phrases. You may know what they mean, but some people aren't, and they'll lose interest in your fic if they can't understand it.
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