| "Dirty Little Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 21:41 CDT
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dang that was hot...i hope you continue it..
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Title: aka Shadow Mistress (not logged in) and Dark Magician Girl / Hikaru on ff.net
Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (not logged in) On: July 08, 2005 03:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hehe, that was one delicious ch. *smirks* Very interesting, and definitely can't wait for more. I thought I reviewed for this story/ch before on this site, guess I was wrong unless by some chance you reposted it maybe? lol. Ah well, good lemons are worth reading more than once. ^_~ Write more soon, see ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: UkeToSetosSeme On: February 22, 2005 12:04 CST
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You had him just leave?!? How could you? That is just so mean!!! Anyway, the lemon was so hot!! I can't wait till you update again!! I'll be waiting!
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Reviewed By: kasbaka On: February 22, 2005 06:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your work! Please don't discontinue it! It's not near crap material! Honest! I actually giggled when I found out it updated! GIGGLED! Does that show how good it is?! ^-^; I really think it's a great story, if you can't tell.
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Reviewed By: Motje (to lazy to log in) On: February 22, 2005 03:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Yay for smut! I thought it was pretty good. If I would write it, THEN it would be amaturistic (can't even spell the word >.
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 21:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Good job writing it! Not bad! LOL, I love it!
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Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not sure what do say... there is no word to describe how great your lemon was...
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Title: >=3
Reviewed By: Yami Bakura Itemri On: February 21, 2005 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O HOT DAMN!!! PHRAW! Like... next best thing to steamy hot soapy up the wall shower sex is fast rough voyeristic high school bathroom over the countertop sex. XD Especially with those 2. Bwaahahahaha
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 17:10 CST
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ugh! so hot!! continue soon and fyi, S&M is not solo and mastrabation. its slave an master or sadiam and masochism.
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Reviewed By: Bluelilly1928 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your Lemons are not amateurish for a second try or first they are very good.
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 10:56 CST
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O.o continue soon, i wanna see what happens next
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 11:23 CST
Comment/Review:
awsome awsome awsome!! Update soon I love this story!
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Reviewed By: Yami Bakura Itemri On: January 29, 2005 08:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More soon please! Must know what is going on behind Closed Doors XD~
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Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 07:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know what? I have to say this whether you all like it or not... this story... IS THE BEST THING I'VE READ IN A LONG TIME!!!!!! GOD I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^;;;; I'm on drugs... mostly yaoi... *points to fic* it's like a drug... and I NEED more...
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 13:31 CST
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The idea of Ryou masturbating... is kinda sexy and funny at the same time, although more sexy than funny. Can't wait til Bakura finds out, it's going to be awesome. And I love the description of the ceremony, and the pain. It was chilling... and Bakura was actually selfless in taking away Ryou's pain! Kinda reminds me of that duel in the manga, in the beginning of the Battle City finals, ya know? Update soon!
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Reviewed By: jaretgurl On: January 22, 2005 09:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've never read anything like this before(i mean in the bakura and yami going to school.)so up date soon, so i know whats going on.
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Sunrise [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 03:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue and update soon! that was really good~!!! I love Baku/Ryou pairings
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Reviewed By: Velvetina(Wont let me log in!) On: January 11, 2005 10:32 CST
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Hmmm won't let me long in! That sucks, anyways awsome story!!! I love the way you gave the Yami's their own body you came up with a plausible explanation which is more than most ppl do.
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Reviewed By: Yami_Bakura_Itemri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 05:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh RA DAMN this is good. I do hope you are going to update soon. ^^" This is much better than some of the trash I've been reading of late... Please Update soon...
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 01:14 CST
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Hm, I don't mind this too much. It's interesting so far... Well go on, write more and let's see where you take it!
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Reviewed By: Crimson Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. It's very original and most of all Bakura and Yami No Bakura are my favorite pairing. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 08:36 CST
Comment/Review:
very nice, please continue soon
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: LPGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 05:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Please update! I can't wait! I love the description of the seperation. It almost made me feel it *cringe* but I still love it! Please update! Ja ne! ~_^
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Title: aka Dark Magician Girl / Hikaru on ff.net
Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 02:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay you posted on here! ^_^ Thank you! Hope you ud the latest ch soon. See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue soon! I look forward to seeing this. I love R/B and i like your style
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 13:32 CST
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I don`t know why you have no reviews yet, this is really good so far. I hope you update soon.
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