| "In Four Months" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: it's cool
Reviewed By: ccam3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: yaoikitten [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was very good i like your take on the relationship and how it works very good ^_^ -huggles for a good job-
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Reviewed By: Sekiseishi On: April 03, 2005 18:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Mmm, yaoi tastey numiness. You should write some more like this. Wet dreams or not. =^.^=
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Title: Very Nice.
Reviewed By: Anoyo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice story! It went very into character detail and thought processes; an altogether rare thing in plotless lemons. ^_^ Congratulations! As I told a friend of mine while I read this: "Good. In-character. But raunchy." Very little figurative language and one hell of a lot of blunt shove-your-face-in-it description. All-told, a very nice piece of literature. Wouldn't recommend it for the Pulitzer, but if asked for the name of good FMA smut, your name is on the list. Congrats and have a nice night.
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Title: Very good
Reviewed By: Runishie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 15:44 CST
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i liked your story. It was very in depth for a one shot and had excellent detail. I found it wasn't rushed or dragged out too slow. A very well written story indeed.
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Reviewed By: kazukii-chan On: January 22, 2005 23:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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