"Divine Desire: Tainted" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] |
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Reviewed By: miaa_hiaa [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 10:44 CDT Comment/Review: awsomely awsome story! god i love it YOUR AWSOME!
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Reviewed By: inu ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 01:49 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey i love how this story is comming along and the characters are real believable i cant wait for the next chapter. Oh and i was wondering if you could help me with some constuctive critisism on my first story, A Warring Love thanx.
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Reviewed By: inuninjad On: July 31, 2005 01:34 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey i love how this story is comming along and the characters are real believable i cant wait for the next chapter. Oh and i was wondering if you could help me with some constuctive critisism on my first story, A Warring Love thanx.
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Title: HEY! Reviewed By: 123Meme Go On: July 22, 2005 00:31 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: The story is coming great so far. Sorry I have not reviewed in a long time. Update Soon. P.S. Still LOVE YA!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: HEY! Reviewed By: 123Meme Go On: July 22, 2005 00:28 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: The story is coming great so far. Sorry I have not reviewed in a long time. Update Soon. P.S. Still LOVE YA!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: porkchop_27 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 14:18 CDT Comment/Review: Nice chapter. And thanks for explaining the usage of "Kilala"; I totally understand. I'm liking how it's coming along: not too fast, not too slow. Newho, looking forward to the next chap! Keep up the good work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 21:11 CDT Comment/Review: really like your story.... its great how you twist everything and add new people which twists the story even more your story is food for the mind... please update or else ^_^
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Reviewed By: Crimson-Vixen On: July 13, 2005 18:22 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i love the style of your writing, very enjoyable i really love the whole story, please try and finish soon, i know your prolly bussy but try, well great story!
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Reviewed By: inu-kago-kusa-momi (2 lazy 2 log in) On: July 12, 2005 20:59 CDT Comment/Review: awesome chapter...thanx for the explaination at the end..Its much clearer now..neways...update..update..update..update..:)
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Reviewed By: porkchop_27 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 18:32 CDT Comment/Review: great chapter! and thanks for clearing some of that stuff up. but i have to say that i was a little disappointed with useage of "Kilala" rather than "Kirara", but thass nuthing major. ^^;; keep up the good work and update soon!
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Reviewed By: MirokuMonk On: July 09, 2005 01:07 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: THIS IS A REALY GOOD STORY! I CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS!!!
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Reviewed By: doujo (dlg) On: July 08, 2005 20:12 CDT Comment/Review: great chapter!! :D I really, really love this story. (And it doesn't look like Charlie's Angel anymore!) please update soon, I wanna read more!! Can't wait for the next chappie!!
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Reviewed By: inu-kago-kusa-momi (2 lazy 2 log in) On: July 07, 2005 18:25 CDT Comment/Review: awesome chapter...keep up the good work...update soon...neways..update..update.update..
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Reviewed By: *Inuluvher151*(notsignedin) On: July 03, 2005 15:48 CDT Comment/Review: hey this is a great story can't wait until you update which i hope is soon cuz i want to find out what happens to Inu and the gang. I hope Kagome and Sango are alright
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Reviewed By: phantomflame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 23:49 CDT Comment/Review: cool story, I spent most of the day reading all the chapters. it would have been funny if when Ayame asked Kouga if he was ok with her having a kid with Sess, he said no. (not funny haha, funny that's messed up) sometimes my sense of humor can be a little off.
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