| "Divine Desire: Tainted" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] |
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Reviewed By: not login in On: March 05, 2005 15:45 CST
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I think you should give rin a bigger roll I like to see sess and rin togeter.
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Reviewed By: GothycCoalChambr (logged out) On: February 28, 2005 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another good chappie, keep them coming. can't wait for the next chappie, please update soon. i know you won't dissapoint!
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Reviewed By: LaDDee_WaRRioR (not logged in) On: February 27, 2005 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stupid computer won't let me go in my e-mail so I didn't know what has been updated or whatsoever ... anyway still writing great story ...I see ... well please continue with it or disappoint your fan. (sorry if it sounds threatning)
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: February 27, 2005 18:13 CST
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that was really good! I hope you'll update soon, I'm happy you know where you're going with the story now ^^ cuz it means maybe you'll update sooner! yay! Well... update soon then lol ^_^
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Title: Divine Desire: Tainted
Reviewed By: Dustychic On: February 27, 2005 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your fic. because I have never read a fic so Charley's Angel-ish before. I also liked the fact that Sesshy seemed to care about the girls ehile retaing is overall grumpiness and coldness. My only only problem is I'm dieing to read the next chapter. Update Soon!... pretty please...
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Title: Fantastic
Reviewed By: Panarican_Azucar On: February 16, 2005 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it!! plz update soon! i want to know what will happen betwwen Inuyasha and Kagome, also the kikyo situation.
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Reviewed By: inu-kano-kusa-momi(2 lazy 2 login) On: February 15, 2005 21:05 CST
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hey...that was good...not one of your best but it was still good....neways..this is the only fic that I reviewed in all of the chapters...that was good...update......update...update
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: February 15, 2005 16:15 CST
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yay! you updated again! ^^ true, it was short, but I still like this chapter! I hope you'll update soon, I wanna know the rest... and I think Kagome's beginning to have some feelings for Inu Yasha... yay!!! well update soon lol ^^
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Reviewed By: GothycCoalChambr (logged out) On: February 15, 2005 11:10 CST
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good chappie. so kikyou is alive, and she's kagome's cousin? that's great. lol. can't wait for the next chappie, update soon.
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Reviewed By: LaDDee_WaRRioR (not logged in) On: February 08, 2005 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn ... still writing one hell of a story ... and yea my comp is freaking slow as hell ... anyway great story, continue it.
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Reviewed By: inu-kago-kusa-momi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 20:00 CST
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I made the squeeck at the end of the chapter......lol...
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Reviewed By: inu-kago-kusa-momi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 19:56 CST
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aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh.......I.....L-O-V-E...I-T...and you know what?...the funny thing is I actually made a loud squeeck( is that how you spell it) ne way it was great...I laughed at my self when I realized that I squeecked(however you spell it)lol...update..update..update...:)
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Title: jtcl
Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 21:32 CST
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I like reading this I hope you up date soon.
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Reviewed By: NaomiIkahen On: February 06, 2005 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright... I've noticed a few punctuation and grammar errors, but not so much as to make me stop reading. You have a good plot, although it seems just a bit rushed. And it's also a bit unique, originality is a bit rare these days. Great job so far, I can't wait till you update, keep up the good work =)
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: February 06, 2005 15:46 CST
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great fic! it really made my day less boring and i can't wait for the next chapter! ja ne for now!
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