| "Of Rivalry and Thieves" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: PhoenixFlames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 14:38 CST
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Don't worry. We'll cheer for you. I have two of my fics done now. You want me to update so I did that.
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Title: author of Crashing Down
Reviewed By: fallen_tenshi_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 08:46 CST
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hey, i read your fanfic, its good! dont worry! and if you like my fanfic, "Crashing Down" then i think you'll like my other one too. its called, "My Ruined Life" k thanks for your reviews!
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Reviewed By: EvilFire4321 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
-sigh- ure gonna hate me for this but, it needs to be said for u to be better. [not saying im a great writier] You have some mechanical mistakes [usually w/ quotes], making a new paragraph for each new speaker is essential, some few mistakes in the grammer and sentence structure part as well. You get ure meaning across rather blatantly, try to add some more detail and action. Um.......i think thats all i remember to say but otherwise the plot so far has potential. Oh!!!! Um...it might be good to write longer chapters as well b/c all ure chapters combined could have made on whole chapter. Ok, i'm done -waits to be killed-
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 18:35 CST
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY EVEN IF IT IS LATE. GREAT STORY AND I OFFER MY SERVICES TO BE A BETA READER FOR YA....THATS IF YA WANT TO BUT IF YOU DON'T THATS COOL I UNDERSTAND. WELL ANYWAY LOVED IT UPDATE SOME MORE AS SOON AS U CAN. JA MATA AIRY
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 20:03 CST
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Happy Birthday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: PhoenixFlames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like your fanfics also. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: katiepatie (not logged in) On: February 06, 2005 17:21 CST
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better now with the new format....keep it up!
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 16:44 CST
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I like the title...my reagards to kaja1234 for it....starting a new paragraph for each time someone new speaks would definetely make the story easier to read....it's going great so far so keep it up! ^^
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 19:55 CST
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oh yeah, a title for ya, umm try this: Of Rivalry and Thieves. ^___^ hope ya like!
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 19:53 CST
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lovely fic! just some advice, try starting a new paragraph for each new person speaking, (check out a actual book to see what i mean.) it'll make the story easier to read, and try to make longer chappies! ^_______^ love the fic! update soon!!!!!!
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Title: 1st review!
Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, I'm your first reviewer! ^^ I'm so happy! *does happy dance* I can see a promising story unfolding...keep it up! ^^ Thanks for the support, I give you my full support as well! ^_^
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