Reviewed By: liddle taijiya On: January 14, 2005 18:57 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I thought the story was very cute! You always read lemon Miroku/Sango fanfics. It was nice to just read a normal story with not so much sex action. Not that I dont like those kind of stories.. Lol, but really I thought you did a excellent job! Loved how you used Japanese words also! Like "Aneue" and "Chichiue." Very nice ^^
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