| "For the heart of a demon" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: vampirebride kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 21:09 CST
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i am sorry but i do not like this story liked the begining but it just went down hill
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Title: For The Heart Of A Demon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 16:13 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: For The Heart Of A Demon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 16:38 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been a most interesting, original, but often confusing fic to read. The spelling and grammar need work, and it is often hard to tell who is speaking and what action is taking place. Regardless, I have spent most of the afternoon reading this and find that I want to read the rest when it is posted! And, BTW, my vote would be for her to eventually end up w/Sesshoumaru ... as it should have been in the beginning. Now that she has apparently chosen the demonic side totally, however, one wonders if it would even serve a purpose to have her back w/him? I look forward to the next intriguing installment!
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Title: well...
Reviewed By: InuYashasloveLorn (nsi sry) On: March 10, 2005 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so your finally gonna make them make up? huh? huh? huh? please say you are i couldn't stand that she was going to kill her self well thankx for E-mailng me! ^_^ and keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE? and i love gory detail and when people get into detail with everything but the clothes i dont really care for that really well keep up the good work again and update again soon please?
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Title: WOW!!!!!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow so like you said this isn't a Kag/Nar? that's just confusing with the way you left it!! well anyway keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Title: Nifty
Reviewed By: smalfoy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, that's a very interesting story, and kind of a neat idea. But I do admit, it was hard to follow sometimes. A little more detail would have been nice to get the whole picture (whether it was about Kagome - b/c even in the beginning you only called her the black inuyoukai - or even Naraku or the other lord demons.) But all in all it's pretty interesting and I'm eager to see where its going. Is this a S/K or a N/K? Is it wrong that I want Naraku to win her over??? LoL. Can't wait to see more!
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 00:08 CST
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u updated it today! lolz, made me so happy! u had both inu and kikyo killed, rather messy too. that was fun to read cuz not many stories kill them like htat. now, let's see, what will naruka wish for? o, i can't wait for the next chapter!! i just love this story! tessie
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Title: Hmmm
Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 13:14 CST
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very very interesting, i like this one so far. i hope to see an update soon. tessie
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