| "A Parallel Dimensional Fairytale" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 18:37 CDT
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i know it must take forever to put up a chap because from what i see their always very long (which is good). But I was just woundering if the next chap is going to come out any time soon?
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: foxfire730- not logged in On: August 03, 2005 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really a great fic. i'm into it and everything. but one thing i noticed was... you need more reviews! you deserve so much more! the reviews people have left are great, but geez, you write so much! and the stroy/plot is amazing! i've enjoyed the recent dimension, with inuyasha being the womanizing, i'm guessing, stable boy, and kagome being the young, blind princess. it certainly has been an adventure. it seems that kagome's and inu's relationship is growing more and progressing steadily at each dimension, and i'm glad for that. at this point though, i'm wondering when and how they'll get together. now it's time for the compliments to be showered on you: you have your own style of writing, and the plot is all of your own. it's point blank fantastic! the new dimensions and character counter parts are always a surprise, and always unpredictable. you've taken original scenes form the anime and crafted them into the story in a way that couldn't be done by any other. besides, who doesn't like a badass inuyasha? truthful comments: i admit that i have to reread some paragrapghs over to get what's going on, but that's not a big issue. just be careful not to ramble and bring a whole bunch of sentences together. it doesn't occur much in the story, but occasionaly i do get lost.well, that about sums it up! great fic, keep updating, and i'll keep reading. though i have to wonder... are kagome and inuyasha going to have there conversation soon? i'm eager to see how that plays out.
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 18:16 CDT
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I REALLY LIKE WERE YOUR GOING WITH THIS STORY IT TOOK ME FOREVER TO CATCH UP BUT IT REALLY IS AN EXCELLENT IDEA. I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER IS UP WICH I PRESUME MIGHT TAKE SOME TIME LOOKING AT THE SIZE OF THE CHAPTERS BUT I'LL BE LOOKING FOWARD TO THE DEMENSIONS THAT ARE TO COME. GOOD LUCK AND I HOPE TO SEE AND UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: forever_love [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 12:40 CDT
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*wipes tear* you are such a lovely fiction writer! I really Can't wait for the next chapter oh and I have an Idea for a male name (its my favourite one)" Anakin " I cant think of a last name But I hope that helps somehow
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Reviewed By: chibiruler1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 17:41 CDT
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dude i am in LOVE with your story dude you really need to update soon or im going to just die! jk lol! well i think you have very interesting ideas and you plot is great! i like how you didnt give the charators ooc ness that just makes it even cooler! so you english isnt your first known language i would have never guessed it by the way you wright the story! i hope to see a new chapter soon and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: May 20, 2005 09:35 CDT
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Thanks for updating on mediaminer. Your story is really original and now I can't wait to see what happens with stable boy Inuyasha. I'm really enjoying it and I hope you update again soon. Thanks again!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 15:34 CDT
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Please bring the chapters up to date or fix this at AFF.net. I'm really enjoying your story. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: EquineBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! Keep going and UPdadte soon please!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 18:26 CDT
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Oh, I forgot. The format is messed up on your last chapter. You need to fix it, please. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 18:23 CDT
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Darn it! I thought you updated... I'll check back again later....
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Reviewed By: forever_love [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 21:28 CST
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YAY As I thought the newest chapter was a blast The fact that this story is so original makes it so great!Lets just say the quicker it takes you to write the next chapter the better!! I'll Be waiting!=D
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Reviewed By: forever_love [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 16:22 CST
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Great fic i love it so far please update soon
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 13:36 CST
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Awesome so far!!!!! Update soon!!!
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Title: miau
Reviewed By: Gnibble [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 14:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loooooooooooove your story. To be honest I haven't read it yet but...whatever. Just don't stop writing, because I think you are a very talented writer. Aaaaaaaaand: You are from Italy, right? Scio nihil scire..et scio non possidere Inuyasha! by the way... do you mean: scio me nihil scire et scio me/ non possidere Inu yasha?
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Title: Neat
Reviewed By: Hellequin 666 On: January 09, 2005 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it's a pretty interesting story so far, and since you said english is not your first language, I find it hard to believe that someone who is not fluent in french would be able to lace text with it, therefore I believe you are from France, a country which was once colonially french, belgium or My native country:Canada, perhaps the francophone province of quebec.
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