| "A Parallel Dimensional Fairytale" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Title: le sigh.
Reviewed By: magicolor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffle* You know, I realised something a few days ago. This fanfiction has become one of the ones I now have to delete from my favourites list. I've kept it there under a watchful eye, reread it a few thousand times but now, it's time. So here's to the death of a beautiful story.
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 10:06 CST
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are you going to abandon the story or is the next chap just really taking this long??? i hope that you didn't give up. But either way good luck.
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Title: The Angst.
Reviewed By: magicolor [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're killing me. KILLING ME. My anticipation for this next chapter has been slowly eating way at me since I read the last one. I swear I've re-read the ending at least twently times by now. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Title: GAH!
Reviewed By: magicolor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are magnificent! You are lovely! You make me so so so happyyyyy! Tra la la!! I was THRILLED when I first saw that you had finally updated and then realized that I was really lame for actually following this story for so long. I got over it though. You are such a great writer, please keep it up and give us the next chapter soon!! PS. I think I almost cried when he kissed her.
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 21:52 CDT
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Por Fin!!! please never take that long again lol. This is still my favorite story and i'm dying to see how it finishes. Update ASAP please!! I really enjoyed this chap since it gave alot of insight on Inuyasha and his feelings. AND finally a kiss! I can't wait to see were it goes from here. take care and good luck. PEACE!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 21:19 CDT
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Wow, I just caught up with this again and it's going great. I like your pacing and your writing style. I can't wait to read more and see what happens after that kiss. :) (P.S. = You might get more reviews if you allow people who are not signed in to review your story. Some people are too lazy to sign in and won't leave a review if they have to make the effort to sign in.)
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 18:17 CDT
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hey are we ever going to get an update or has it been forgotten??? :(
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Reviewed By: BlackMamba07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing, amazing story. A long wait between updates, but man, you really make up for it. I love the depth of thought and originality that has gone into this plotline. Thanks for writing!
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Title: REAL ratings
Reviewed By: Kags101 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Messed up in my last reveiw, sorry ^^
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Reviewed By: Kags101 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
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I just want to start off this reveiw by telling you how origanal your story is! I haven't read a story quite like yours. One question though, do they get breaks where they can relax as their own bodies/animated selves? Fighting the forces of evil 24/7 must be tiring. Tehee! Keep up with the good work and I look forward to reading new chapters!
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 09:40 CDT
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I am so happy you've updated. It's been a while but you've made it worth the wait. I still think that this is the best story line that I've heard on this site and you get into so much detail that you can practicaly see what your reading. I can't wait to read how creative you get with the rest. Good Luck. Update soon :)
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 18:37 CDT
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i know it must take forever to put up a chap because from what i see their always very long (which is good). But I was just woundering if the next chap is going to come out any time soon?
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: foxfire730- not logged in On: August 03, 2005 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really a great fic. i'm into it and everything. but one thing i noticed was... you need more reviews! you deserve so much more! the reviews people have left are great, but geez, you write so much! and the stroy/plot is amazing! i've enjoyed the recent dimension, with inuyasha being the womanizing, i'm guessing, stable boy, and kagome being the young, blind princess. it certainly has been an adventure. it seems that kagome's and inu's relationship is growing more and progressing steadily at each dimension, and i'm glad for that. at this point though, i'm wondering when and how they'll get together. now it's time for the compliments to be showered on you: you have your own style of writing, and the plot is all of your own. it's point blank fantastic! the new dimensions and character counter parts are always a surprise, and always unpredictable. you've taken original scenes form the anime and crafted them into the story in a way that couldn't be done by any other. besides, who doesn't like a badass inuyasha? truthful comments: i admit that i have to reread some paragrapghs over to get what's going on, but that's not a big issue. just be careful not to ramble and bring a whole bunch of sentences together. it doesn't occur much in the story, but occasionaly i do get lost.well, that about sums it up! great fic, keep updating, and i'll keep reading. though i have to wonder... are kagome and inuyasha going to have there conversation soon? i'm eager to see how that plays out.
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 18:16 CDT
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I REALLY LIKE WERE YOUR GOING WITH THIS STORY IT TOOK ME FOREVER TO CATCH UP BUT IT REALLY IS AN EXCELLENT IDEA. I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER IS UP WICH I PRESUME MIGHT TAKE SOME TIME LOOKING AT THE SIZE OF THE CHAPTERS BUT I'LL BE LOOKING FOWARD TO THE DEMENSIONS THAT ARE TO COME. GOOD LUCK AND I HOPE TO SEE AND UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: forever_love [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 12:40 CDT
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*wipes tear* you are such a lovely fiction writer! I really Can't wait for the next chapter oh and I have an Idea for a male name (its my favourite one)" Anakin " I cant think of a last name But I hope that helps somehow
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