Reviewed By: Blackened_Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 10:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad ideas, but I really dislike the way you expressed them. The story was good (although the plot seemed a bit rushed to me) but the way you wrote confusseed me. Perhaps you should consider revising. Don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to flame here!! I'm just saying, I'm sorry if you find my words harsh or brash, again I'm not trying to flame ya. Plz don't hate me and understand I'm saying this writer to writer, that you might want to consider a different style of writing
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