| "Teamwork : Foxplay" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Lisa Jane On: May 16, 2012 10:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your Teamwork fic, so naturally I read this. It was good; but my biggest complaint is the use of words like 'bitch' and 'slut' coming from the Kyuubi. Those words are entirely human-made and make no sense for a thousand year old chakra powerhouse to say. I know its fun to have the fox repeatedly call Sasuke a 'bitch', but it makes the demon seem more like a brawling, drunkard than an ancient diety. It demeans him. |
Reviewed By: Adaire On: June 05, 2010 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now, *that*...was a particularly amusing literary work. Truly a pleasure to read. I loved the ending, most of all- I'm still bemused and smiling from it even as I write this. Kudos for writing such a wonderful-in many ways- fanfic!
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Title: Ohyes~
Reviewed By: NaruNaru On: July 10, 2008 22:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luuuuurvee this pairing. Kyuubi scares me, though. Wouldn't want to catch vhim when he's like this. Hosnap.
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Reviewed By: mizukihikari On: June 09, 2008 01:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so love this paring especially how you portrait it. please do more!!
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Reviewed By: LunayaWolf On: May 02, 2007 17:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very hot and spicy! Short and sweet. The humor was perfect. I really liked the last exchange between Kakashi and Kurenai I wasn't expecting that, and it really made me laugh : ) maybe you should write a short story about Kakashi's love life. I cant wait to read more from your Naruto world, please don't stop! You are an amazing talent!!
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Reviewed By: Empyreal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 19:14 EDT
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Wow I can't believe I didn't review this before. This is about the fourth or fifth time I read it - it's that awesome. Kyuubi/Sasuke is very yummy, and I love the whole dynamic of Sasuke turning on the Kyuubi mainly through his dominance. I'd have to agree though - dominant Sasuke is far more appealing. The whole Kyuubi asking Hinata to pet him was very funny, and poor put-out Hinata when he fell asleep! Can't wait to read more in this universe (=
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Reviewed By: teaspoon On: April 22, 2005 14:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the whole Teammates series. I didn't think I would but I was surprised. This scene is HOt. llol nothing else needs to be said. Do you have any more Teammate cover art? Anyway I'll keep reading between here and ffn. Talk to you later!
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Reviewed By: Sasu/Naru Lover #? On: April 16, 2005 21:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, that was AMAZING!!! IT ROCKED!!! *hyperventilates* ^^ No, really, that was great -- excellent plot, excellent idea, excellently written, etc. Just plain EXCELLENT!!! ^___~ Okay, now that I have that out of my system, I'm going to go check out your other stories........ Keep up the good work!!! ^___^ Ja ne!!!
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Title: to tell a tale of heroes
Reviewed By: dinkscythe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 08:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh brave sasuke, sacrificing his ass in order to protect the lives and futures of the precious lil childrens of the village. someone should erect a monument *evilbiggrin* besides kyuubi-naruto, that is... love this series, so it's cool to see more of it/glimpses of future. sakura's so cool, big as a ship and disgruntled about her boys. i like seeing the team 7 relationship from the POVs of their peers, too.
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Title: yay *oops*
Reviewed By: rhi-chann On: January 23, 2005 00:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was teh uber awsome.And rhichan, loved it like hell xDD
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Title: yay xD
Reviewed By: rhi-chann On: January 23, 2005 00:52 EST
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