| "Top Flight Mother Fucking Security" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: ValliGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 05:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that was a really great start and can't wait till you update........ so you know please update as soon as possibale, and don't stop writtting cuz thats no good.
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Reviewed By: bobness27 On: March 29, 2005 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story so far! its wonderful and im hooked and will have to keep reading. keep up the good work.. oh.. but i do recoment that you check grammar a little and spelling here and there. love your work.
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