| "In Love With A Ghost" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Breath Of Fire On: May 29, 2005 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no one told you to stop writing!! go,go and write more!!
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Reviewed By: swunp On: May 04, 2005 07:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey!!update soon pls!
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Title: Amanda
Reviewed By: Kyuubi_Sharingan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 21:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooh, does this mean that you're not going to be updating until the summer? I hope that I read it wrong, because this is a very, very good story, and I can't wait until the next chapter! I can't believe that you ended it there either... *sniff* next thing we'll find out is that her parents weren't dead and that those bodies had something to do with Orochimaru... Anywho, you need to update soon (I need more Kakashi!!!) amanda
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Reviewed By: Princess Krystal01 On: April 29, 2005 15:50 CDT
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^^ yea u feel inspired....O_O Juri's parents....oh no...
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Title: you're evill~~~
Reviewed By: Naomi_saitoh_ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what's up with the cliffhangers... >:T
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Title: ahhh
Reviewed By: Heeroschibiangel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more!!! must have more*nods lots*
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Title: *pokes*
Reviewed By: DeeChan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 21:21 CST
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Ahh you updated, thank you n_n. That was quite the plot twist at the end of the chapter there. I would never would have guessed something like that would happen. Also I know how much being vertically challenged can be annoying sometimes when you can't reach something(I'm only 5'0' myself). Ahh but smaller people tend to have a longer life expectancy than larger people, not unlike how smaller dogs usually live longer than large ones ^^;;. I found the whole 'Kaido situation' funny too. Is he going to be calling Juri in a later chapter? *laughs evilly*
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Reviewed By: Princess Krystal01 On: March 19, 2005 21:02 CST
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Im soooo sorry I couldn't review for this story and A girl named Yama in fanfiction...this popup blocker won't let me review...I just want to say I love both stories ver very much
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Title: update!..please.
Reviewed By: darklightangelgirl On: March 17, 2005 20:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update!! It's so cool. Kakashi is one of my favorite characters! It a really great story. write more please.^-^
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Title: helloo
Reviewed By: Naomi_Saitoh On: March 06, 2005 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is very original! In love with a ghost... pretty strange but interestingly mysterious, although it is kind of disappointing that Juri will never have a real live relationship with kakashi... aww :T I like your style of writing; very anime-ish with the exaggerations and animated personalities. But i think you made kakashi a bit more hentai than he usually is! especially with the kiss, and the sleeping stuff. I would really like to know where this story is going with the romance, and about naomi (hey thats myy name!). well.. PLEASE update coz i realli wanna know what happens! Love your story, hope to read UPDATES~ byee ;]
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Reviewed By: ChristinaRR [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm reading both this and the Yama story. Usually I don't read too many OC stories but I really like yours! ^_^ Sure there are some grammar mistakes, but I don't care. Heck I usually don't even notice them. I can't proofread to save my life. And I like your style of writing; maybe more physical descriptions, though. I can't help notice that difference between this and the Yama story (it's more descriptive). o.o So no real complaints from me. Other than you need to update! :D
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Reviewed By: shadow_kazul [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another really good story! Thats it your going on my favorite authurs list.
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Reviewed By: DreamAnimeKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed all of the chapters. It's a very good story.
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Reviewed By: tesp71283 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 01:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you have a very interesting plot but I do feel there are some gramatical errors in your story and that the style of writing could improve. Otherwise I can't wait till you up date!!!
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Reviewed By: DeeChan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 14:59 CST
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Very interesting story so far, and there was no horrible spelling and grammar often found in fanfiction. n_\\ (pathetic attempt at a Kakashi smiling face). I would have been abit more cautious to read this story if it had been called \'In Love with a Poltergeist\' :D. I guess you know the difference between the two though. I was wondering if there would be more explaination in coming chapters as to why Juri can see and touch Kakashi? I won\'t threaten you to update your story either, as it seems someone else has already done that..*sweatdrops* I'll try to review again since it seems to have cut off my review the 1st time.
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