| "In Love With A Ghost" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princess Krystal01 On: April 29, 2005 15:50 CDT
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^^ yea u feel inspired....O_O Juri's parents....oh no...
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Title: you're evill~~~
Reviewed By: Naomi_saitoh_ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what's up with the cliffhangers... >:T
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Title: ahhh
Reviewed By: Heeroschibiangel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more!!! must have more*nods lots*
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Title: *pokes*
Reviewed By: DeeChan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 21:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Ahh you updated, thank you n_n. That was quite the plot twist at the end of the chapter there. I would never would have guessed something like that would happen. Also I know how much being vertically challenged can be annoying sometimes when you can't reach something(I'm only 5'0' myself). Ahh but smaller people tend to have a longer life expectancy than larger people, not unlike how smaller dogs usually live longer than large ones ^^;;. I found the whole 'Kaido situation' funny too. Is he going to be calling Juri in a later chapter? *laughs evilly*
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Reviewed By: Princess Krystal01 On: March 19, 2005 21:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Im soooo sorry I couldn't review for this story and A girl named Yama in fanfiction...this popup blocker won't let me review...I just want to say I love both stories ver very much
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Title: update!..please.
Reviewed By: darklightangelgirl On: March 17, 2005 20:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update!! It's so cool. Kakashi is one of my favorite characters! It a really great story. write more please.^-^
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Title: helloo
Reviewed By: Naomi_Saitoh On: March 06, 2005 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is very original! In love with a ghost... pretty strange but interestingly mysterious, although it is kind of disappointing that Juri will never have a real live relationship with kakashi... aww :T I like your style of writing; very anime-ish with the exaggerations and animated personalities. But i think you made kakashi a bit more hentai than he usually is! especially with the kiss, and the sleeping stuff. I would really like to know where this story is going with the romance, and about naomi (hey thats myy name!). well.. PLEASE update coz i realli wanna know what happens! Love your story, hope to read UPDATES~ byee ;]
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Reviewed By: ChristinaRR [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm reading both this and the Yama story. Usually I don't read too many OC stories but I really like yours! ^_^ Sure there are some grammar mistakes, but I don't care. Heck I usually don't even notice them. I can't proofread to save my life. And I like your style of writing; maybe more physical descriptions, though. I can't help notice that difference between this and the Yama story (it's more descriptive). o.o So no real complaints from me. Other than you need to update! :D
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Reviewed By: shadow_kazul [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another really good story! Thats it your going on my favorite authurs list.
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Reviewed By: DreamAnimeKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed all of the chapters. It's a very good story.
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Reviewed By: tesp71283 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 01:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you have a very interesting plot but I do feel there are some gramatical errors in your story and that the style of writing could improve. Otherwise I can't wait till you up date!!!
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Reviewed By: DeeChan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 14:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Very interesting story so far, and there was no horrible spelling and grammar often found in fanfiction. n_\\ (pathetic attempt at a Kakashi smiling face). I would have been abit more cautious to read this story if it had been called \'In Love with a Poltergeist\' :D. I guess you know the difference between the two though. I was wondering if there would be more explaination in coming chapters as to why Juri can see and touch Kakashi? I won\'t threaten you to update your story either, as it seems someone else has already done that..*sweatdrops* I'll try to review again since it seems to have cut off my review the 1st time.
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Title: Greetings
Reviewed By: DeeChan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 14:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Very interesting story so far, and there was no horrible spelling and grammar often found in fanfiction. n_\\ (
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Title: WOOT
Reviewed By: rose0804 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 12:33 CST
Comment/Review:
YAY!! You updated! By the way, I'm xl-black-tears-lx in FF.net. Also, please update soon or die.
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Reviewed By: PrincessKrystal01 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 12:15 CST
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^_________^ i love this story...stupid fanfiction....won't let me read it....
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