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| "Love and Lament" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 10:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I love this story. I read the first Mercury story you did, and then this one, and I am still amazed. This story has a lot of depth, and shows a great deal of quality to your writing. This is a rather AU story, similar in vein to the manga of Sailor Moon, but with darker tones as well. Or at least, that's what I can tell. Is this based off another fanfiction, or another TV series of SM I haven't heard of? I never saw the live action version so I have no clue what that one was like. Still, I am a fan of your work, and will continue to read it with interest. Heh, and I guess the weird part is that I'm a guy and I like this stuff. Not for any perverted reason (though hey, I like sex, but I don't like sex scenes for the hell of it, something you avoided, and never went into detail for the sex, which I respect a lot) as well as handling a lot of different elements, including the Venus thing. Still, is this your interpretation, or is this story based off of canon Sailor Moon? I've seen the anime, and read the manga, so I don't recognize this version's backstory (the Goddess thing was very different from the one I saw in the manga). Be this concept original or a rehash of an old work, I like it a lot. Please, keep working hard on these stories. I would love to read more of your work. Please start your next story soon. 6 months off is a long time.
| Reviewed By: ordieth117 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not a fan of dark stories, nor tragedies, but I LOVE your work here! This is an excellent retelling of the Sailor Moon saga with a more tragic and realistic flair. Thank you for writing such an awesome story, and please, for my sake, keep their hearts pure.
| Reviewed By: LittleMica [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very imaginative.. keep up the good work!!!
| Title: Ch 5
Reviewed By: Yarrow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is fun to read and your versions of the characters are interesting. There are some grammar and spelling flaws, but I'll point those out in a private message.
| Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories, and this is no exception. I hope that you can update it soon
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