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Reviewed By: Shred On: August 11, 2005 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes. It's definitely time you wrote the sequel. Many people want to read it, but people like my self are generally to lazy to write review about what a great story you wrote.
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Reviewed By: KawaiiJade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 11:41 CDT
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Hey it's me...haven't heard from u in a while...when r u going to put up part 4? I've been waitng...I hope u don't have a writer's block?! Well if u do u know who to call....or send a message to...hehehe I hope I can help u in any way possible....
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Reviewed By: KJ On: April 10, 2005 19:14 CDT
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Hey it's me again. I was so bored and i wanted to read something I ahven't read in a while and ur wonderful sotry pooped up in my mind. i hope Part Four is going along okay and u will ahve time to finish it so i can read it....Please pretty please...Gomen I just love ur story. it is so good....I give u the best...ja'ne until next time...
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Reviewed By: KawaiiJade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 21:15 CST
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Hi it's just me again...I was just reading part three AGAIN...I can't help it this story is so cool. The only bad part is that u haven't put Part Four uo yet...there is gonna be a part four right....*lower lip quivers* PLEASE!!!!!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: KazeKick [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG you so have to write another sequal and fast! This is just such a GOOD FAN FIC!!!!!!!! PLEASE MAKE CHP 4! =)
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Reviewed By: Lady Sk On: February 10, 2005 08:10 CST
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UPDATE SOON please it a good story and I want to know what happens next!!!^_^
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Reviewed By: KawaiiJade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 19:50 CST
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Dude u sooooo have to do a part four. Vegeta and Goten haven't even had their 'chibi's' yet. LOL I think when Trunks calls their unborn child Chibi it's so cute. I feel sorry got Goku when Vegeta calls him his friend instead of his mate...but hey what can I say Vegeta can express feelings like that...or maybe u can? Hahaha I don't know I'll love anything u write. Thank you so much with making Trunks make Goten happy while giving him head. *heantai grin* Well hehehehe I like how Goten is needy for Trunks and I like how Goku and Vegeta our possessive of eachother. i really like'd that. maybe if u do a part four *which I really hope u do* You can have a lil more Goku/Vegeta but this fanfic is probublay only focusing on Goten and Trunks too. But hey both pairings work great with me....and what ever works for you i hope u will write it to make us fans happy. I love you and really really really really really reallly reallly (who lots of 'really's') do an update I would really like that alot.......Ja'ne until next time....
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Reviewed By: KawaiiJade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 19:24 CST
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Yes Yes Yes Yes!!! That was sooooo goood!!! It was sad in the begining and middle but I was sooo happy at the end. At first I didn't think u were going to let Trunks and Goten get together. Then I would have been mad. *just joking* I was really happy that Trunks let Goten mark him. I was happy that u put that in there, I really was. I was also happy that Vegeta told Maron off and told Trunks that Goten was going to die if is stupid self didn't do anything. Hehehehe. I was also happy when Goku was like, 'my son is dying nad no one told me!!' It was a cute story that made me go "aw" Really it was. I was just about to read into the middle when I had to get off the computer. I was like, 'NNNNNOOOOO!!!' So I was really really happy to get back on to finish reading this great story. There is just one more thing I have to say before I leave u...MARON AND EVERYONE AT THE BURGER PLACE EXCEPT LNYZIE CAN GO TO HELL AND TAKE SHINIGAMI'S WRATH WITH THEM!!!! KAMI I HATE HOMOPHBICS I REALLY DO!!!! Oh sorry I forgot...ja'ne and goodluck
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Reviewed By: fei8000000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 01:26 CST
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you need to make a sequel this was great and one of the best I read
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Reviewed By: KawaiiJade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 08:00 CST
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I DEMAND U DO A SEQUEL!!! Now that Trunks has marked him what will they do next? Will Goten mark him in return? Will one get pregant? I don't know...all I know is that I would love for you to make a Sequel....^_~
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Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 21:31 CST
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Oh this was great! Love yaoi, read more and more everyday! You have to make a sequel soon! Can't wait to read the next one, authors favorites you go! lol, well anyways, just cant wait! The whole Trunks Goten thing is soo cute! And Trunks, well he's a ....grr soo mean at first....but who wouldn't love him anyways, i mean he's totally HOTT!!! lol goten, eh he's cute, but I like Goku too, his in a tie wit trunks. By the way, put some Goku Vegeta action in the next one would ya? *If you decide to write one...* lol cuz i'd really like that, thx!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Inus_Kagome_Forever Laterz ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Reviewed By: KawaiiJade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 17:32 CST
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I'm not the 1st reviewer but I'm still reviewing b/c this story was fantastic. At first I was mad 'cause Trunks was just using him but then in the end he claimed him as his mate. It was sooooo KAWAIII. It was wonderfl. I loved it really reallly really much. It's hard to find Yaoi DBZ but I did. I actually love it when they both mark eachother and stuff....I personlay think it's hot...but u know it's just me. Hope u continue ur best writing. Ja'ne
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 13:44 CST
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That was great. I love those two together. I also love Goku/Vegeta. I just started reading Dragonball fics, so I`m still new, but this one rocks.
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