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Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 23:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Will refrain from the Bloody Hell's this time even though it's a, Bloody Hell that was good, but now will tell you why. First of all I am so glad I discovered your fic amongst the thousands of other fics here on media miner. Possession is one of the few fics that I can really get exited about. Well your fic is getting better by the chapter. I love the fact that you take your time and don't rush true the events. And I really did not expect the sudden plot twist (well done). Even though seeing Miroku was gloomy I loved the fact that he's still a hentai :). There are so much mix feelings towards Inuyasha and Kagome you really want them to get together but CAN that even happen. Can't wait for the next chap
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Title: Amazing Chapter
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: April 24, 2005 23:24 PDT
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When Miroku showed up (in the bath of all places and just like him) I had flashbacks of Obiwan Kenobe's post-mortim visits to a young Luke Skywalker, encouraging or cautioning his once-student & friend. Not surprising for one of Kagome's strong abilities, to recieve council from her long-gone companion. Kagome's spirit was broken by what went before and she managed to put herself back together. It was a poor patch-job at best, with major pieces missing or missaligned or deliberately left on the cutting-room floor as she edited out what was too painful. Funny thing about selective memory, the things you most wish to forget have the strong tendency to pop up and say, "Hey! Remember me?" at the worst times. With InuYasha reentering the picture, Kagome can no longer ignore her feelings or scars. And I have a feeling that Sesshoumaru will not be content with a sketchy recount of his brother's time spent chasing the shards with her and their friends. He means to learn how InuYasha became as he was when he found him. Sesshoumaru's curiosity is strong and Kagome has the answers he seeks. It won't take much to shatter what is left of Kagome's defences. One wrong word or action, could send her over the edge...maybe beyond retrieval this time. -- God, I need a new box of tissues!
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Reviewed By: forever_love [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 23:08 PDT
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AHHHH! The chapters just keep getting BETTER!! When your fan fic is done I swear Im going to nominate you for some kind of an award on mediaminer!!!PLEASE update soon your story is like a drug for me.
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: goosh On: April 24, 2005 22:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This is the greatest angst ff I've ever read. Keep up the good work! I loveeee this story.
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Reviewed By: Shapiro [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 20:34 PDT
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Another masterpiece to add to your work of art!! I'm so glad you updated, I was starting to get the chills! Can't wait for the next installment, I'm just enjoying the ride way too much!
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel(nsi) On: April 24, 2005 20:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, wow. =/ im so glad you updated already.. ive been really depressed lately, but every step this story takes that i read, is helping me. i hope you can update again soon. thank you..
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: April 24, 2005 20:03 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Whoohoo!!! What a chapter! I just want to say that I have no critism to share on this story. I am really enjoying the angst. I have a feeling that Kagome and InuYasha will not be together at the end . . . but, I still hope that they will. Yes, I know you warned us, up front . . . so I am an eternal optimist, what can I say. Never hurts to hope. Anyway the story is fantastic; keep up the great work. Thank you, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 18:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, the anguish! Great chapter rated it a 9 because of the spacing thing. It made my eyes go cross-eyed, but it was worth it!! You explored the dark emotional side and did it well. Kagome's characterization is coming along nicely. I love the Miroku hallucination; he always has been a pillar for Kagome. Can't wait for the next installment!
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva(nsi) On: April 24, 2005 18:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Even though mm.org messed up the formating. Very interesting how Miroku was there and talking to her-kind of like a guardian angel. I hope to see more soon!
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Title: Love this story!
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 17:43 PDT
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So far, this story is my favorite of all the ones you've written...great chapter (though MediaMiner messed up the formatting, so there aren't any breaks between paragraphs). So, Kagome remembers too much, and Inuyasha too little...and the scene with Miroku's ghost at the end was thought-provoking, and not just for Kagome. Great job, can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 17:08 PDT
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I don't know why only you seem to have continuing problems with formatting when you post new chapters but it's anoying. (not that it's your falt TBH). Buy any way good chapter!!
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Reviewed By: marijang69 *not logged in* On: April 24, 2005 16:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm so confuzzled.... at the very last, it says: 'she had lied, and so had Miroku'. How did Miroku lie? i hope you explain everything in the next chapter!!! p.s. and please don't make the next chapter like this one! it is very confusing if you don't have paragraph breaks...-_-;;
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Reviewed By: nancey not signed in On: April 24, 2005 16:42 PDT
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Besides the formating thing. Great chapter.So the monk is in the story still, cool. Is he a gost or spirt or something else? It was kinda hard to read with no paragraphs but still as always wonderful writting
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: SylverAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 10:36 PDT
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Wow! Great job on the story so far. It's really well-written. That last chapter was such an interesting twist, with Inuyasha not remembering her, or anything else! Now I'm anxious to see what happens next! How will she get him to remember? And how is he going to react to that kiss? lol I hope you'll have the time to update soon :)
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Reviewed By: forever_love [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 10:33 PDT
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OH GOD!! YOUR TWIST IS SO SAD..I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!! Even though I cried..Man you are so dang talented its not even funny! Im waiting for the next update!
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