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Reviewed By: New Fan On: May 10, 2005 07:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a freaking genius. This chapter was awesome for someone who wrote it in one night. Do you have an outline for this story or this just comes to you when you write?? Please if you can update really soon (like later in the week). Just joking, but please very soon.
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: May 10, 2005 07:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a freaking genius. This chapter was awesome for someone who wrote it in one night. Do you have an outline for this story or this just comes to you when you write?? Please if you can update really soon (like later in the week). Just joking, but please very soon.
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Reviewed By: Mel240 On: May 03, 2005 12:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...I'm going to cry. Why am I going to cry? I'm going to cry because I have to wait for the next chapter. I'm going to cry because there's so many questions I have and all this anticipation... It is so damn hard to find a great Inuyasha fanfic. Especially one as well-written as this. I've read some stories with wonderful plot lines, but the stories were messily put together for the sake of reviews. I absolutely adore the twists you threw in this story. Kagome's transformation, the fucking beautiful, and sick irony of Inuyasha losing his goddamn memory. OF ALL THINGS! I can see that you're going to drag Kagome through the mud by her hair kicking and screaming in this story...that poor girl. All I can say is, that I hope Inuyasha makes up for what he did to her. Even if it's not possible, I basically can't wait to see him try. I loved how you portrayed Shippou, and your theory on him thinking of her as more than a 'surrogate mother'. It was all very fitting. Man...I hope I hope I hope you update soon. This story is wonderful. Definitely up there with the 'Lucky Ones'. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 17:07 PDT
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Creative story possibley one of the most original IY fics I have ever read. And I have read an awful lot of IY fics lol. I'm looking forward to seeing where you are going with this tale it's nice and dark which is rarely well done in the IY fandom.
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Reviewed By: Ary-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 17:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh, God. I just want you to know that I have never read such a dark and disturbing fic in my LIFE. It's...it's fucking amazing!!! I love this story so much. My skin just crawls reading the Inuyasha scenes. Your characters are so believable! They're really different from the original characters, but it seems so realistic, the way they've changed and why. This story is written so seamlessly, so...rightly for the theme...UGH I can't talk about it enough!! Anyway, I really hope you update soon! I'm definitely gonna follow this fic closely!
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Reviewed By: Shmoo741 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 18:45 PDT
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This story is one of the best I've ever read. I wish I had your writing talent. Keep up the good work!!
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Title: Noticed something by chapter nine...
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 11:03 PDT
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What the heck happened to Tessaiga? Inuyasha can't touch it as a full demon, and I can't believe he'd ever abandon it.
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 10:23 PDT
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"I do intend a happy ending..." . . . Wheezy, you jerk! Why'd you ruin it?! This thing is so angsty. Ordinarily, I'd object to any story that had an abused woman re-hooking with the guy who abused her, but this sort of thing is what fanficiton is for. I can feel Kagome mouring for the good person she used to be, for all the slime she's eaten and secreted in the past years.
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: beka-chan On: April 27, 2005 20:40 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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This has to be one of the most original and thrilling fics that I've ever read. I cannot wait for it to continue. :}
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: April 26, 2005 18:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story always inspires more emotions than i myself can handle. you've made me emotionally confused from feeling too many things at once. and for some odd reason i love it.
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Reviewed By: rage2velvet (not signed in) On: April 25, 2005 14:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I couldn't wait for this update. This story makes my week. Thanks for your efforts and hard work and diligence.
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 13:29 PDT
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OMG, the last part was so sad that it made me cry. I love this story and I hope you'll update soon, not forever!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer (not signed in) On: April 25, 2005 08:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you updated again, and I will be honest I was not expecting it so quickly. I guess with the cliffhanger of the last chapter it made me feel better knowing what was happening next. I love the development with this. You have illustrated so much history and emotion with each character as they progress. With each individual character you have masterfully made them three dimensional. I'm very happy at this amazing tale and each chapter gets better and better. Can't wait to see me!
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: April 25, 2005 08:10 PDT
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Seeing Miroku, and he is being so himself. I just cannot wait for more!! Great story!!!
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Reviewed By: LavenderRose (nsi) On: April 25, 2005 07:10 PDT
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Another awesome chapter! Poor Kagome, I think Miroku's "visit" created more problems and questions than anything else. This evil, is it going to force another quest? Man, you've COMPLETELY sucked me into this one...we know Inuyasha remembers none of the horrors that Kagome does, so why does Miroku want her to tell him about the baby? Does he think that'll force Inuyasha to remember what a pr%%% he was before Sesshoumaru found him? And if it does, what purpose will it serve? He's already stated he never loved Kagome, only desired her...or do they equate to the same thing in Inu's mind? Hmmmm....keep up the good work!
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