| "Too Much" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: kiba-chan not logged in On: April 15, 2005 08:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
good story :) my one suggestion is that you start a new paragraph every time someone new starts talking. Very creative, though :)
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Reviewed By: Lil Miss Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Curiosity got the better of me, given your summary. This was funny! I could just see it all happening too. Good job.
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