Reviewed By: Dcis1 On: September 21, 2006 11:47 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: I Found mistakes that were made,like how Per-Fume got the cat curse.As memory surve,in Nabiki 1/2 it was Xian-Pu that cursed her not Not Blind boy.Oh well,if this is Jim's work remeber your own writing or fix it,shiva-kun if you wrote it good job,but same as Jim.
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