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Reviewed By: Quillwing717 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it's VERY unusual for me to feel prompted to poke my shy little head out and write a review. But this one absolutely deserves it. Entertaining, believable, sizzling sexual tension, extremely well-written and paced, with near perfect grammar and usage. Hate to break it to you, but this comes nowhere near the PWP you named it. It's a high-quality fic that prompts me to give you the highest compliment I think any writer can get--you kept me glued to my seat, from beginning to end. Thanks for writing it. ~Quill
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Title: Top Show
Reviewed By: Mr. Amazed On: March 10, 2005 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My goodness, it's very good to see that someone has actually perfected the skill no one hardly ever uses anymore! That is, plot in a one-shot. Though I must say, I wish you would make a sequal, so that we could find out if, as w j said, they could stay together and tht it wouldn't be just a one time thing (And the fact that I really don't like Kikyo). Excellent job, if I don't say so myself!
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Reviewed By: Numisma-nsi On: February 23, 2005 00:51 CST
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dear GOD, woman. you know what? you are fucking EVIL. you owe me a new six-pack of PANTIES DAMNIT! it took me three fucking ours to read this, and goddamn if it wasn't worth every consonant, vowel, comma, and other random punctuational mark. damn you for writing such hot, lemony action. marry me?
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: January 18, 2005 02:12 CST
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WOW that was steamy and good but WAAAAA i still can't stand the heart break that Kikyou represents GRRRRRRRR evil woman. Ok so I'm a sucker for happy endings sue me. Great job. 'Orion
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Title: That was wonderful!
Reviewed By: Katina108 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 01:55 CST
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Wow! that is the best one shot I have ever read! I really do hope to see more from this, and get a happy-ever-after-story out of it, cause who doesn't love happy ever afters. You got a great gift for writing, I mean you really capture the essence of first time lovers ;) Wow, now um I need to go cool off for a bit.
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 00:52 CST
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wow, that's got to be one of the best one-shots i've ever read. and i've read a lot. i really enjoyed it. the way you included the holidays and how you created the characters of the inn keepers. great plot and analysis of inuyasha's and kagome's feelings. good job
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 20:43 CST
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Wow, this is wonderful. You are an excellent writer and I hope to read more from you soon. Perhaps a sequel with a they-can-stay-together-and-be-happy ending? Anyway, thanks for sharing this story with us. I really like it.
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Title: Oh. My.
Reviewed By: OhJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... that's what I call tasty. The tension, the awkwardness, InuYasha's possessiveness in front of Miroku. Blink. Blink. That was my favorite part. It was perfect as a one-shot. Thank you for sharing your work. I'm off to read 'Beast.' Ja ne! :) Joy
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 12:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty steamy! *whips out fan* I hope this is more than a won shot. It was nicely written. :)
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