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Title: Love isn't like that
Reviewed By: Nezumiiroi Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 05:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that whoever tries to find a lemon with Inuyasha and Kagome wants to see some intimate moments between the two characters, and you will get it in this story. However, I want to see a fanfic that is not pulled out so long and I don't want the story to end with a certain hanyou * spoiler * wanting to "love" Kagome, but being willing to just leave her for Kikyou and go to Hell with her whenever they get all the Jewel Shards back. I believe Kikyou was a very kind and gentle person when she was alive, but she is gone and the walking clay pot is just a visual copy, nothing else. If Kikyou still cared for him, there would be no way she would want to drag Inuyasha to hell with her. Kagome trully loves Inuyasha and expects nothing else in return, while Kikyou seems to think she owns Inuyasha's very soul. This was a very drawn out, unsatisfing fanfic, that had good grammar and goog lemon parts (when you got to them), but a terrible ending and subpar story line. All InuxKag fans should steer clear of this work.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: JMaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're one of the best Inuyasha fanfiction writers I've had the pleasure to read, and I've read an embarassingly large number of them. It's not out of the question that you are THE best, but that would take more time to think on than I'm willing to put it. Phenomenal story. I hope things work out and you write more.
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 16:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Loved it.. ever a chance that you might make a part two to it? You know to say how it ended.. even if its good or bad ..you know? =] Well great job ! `r4k
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 15:05 CST
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Your story has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting continues through January 19th-20th, 2006. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Title: ahhh!
Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 21:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
eh... i think i absolutely hate the way this ended. ok i'm not being fair and it's not like the characters were ooc or anything... and i could actually see this happening, so it's kind of realistic... but kikyou, like a black shadow that hangs over everything inuyasha thinks and does, ruins everything. ahh... interesting idea though with the chocolate. i loved that part. and the lemon was really well written and tasteful. i loved it. but the uncertain future is killing me. but then again inuyasha was ic... and i like his own uncertainty when he wonders if he used kagome. nice job.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 21:40 CDT
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While I'm always up for Inuyasha dumping Kikyo, I liked your ending and that the sex doesn't automatically tie up all the loose ends, even if one might whish it did. "The hostess's matching smile slid down her narrow face like snow plopping off a maple branch" -- loved this simile. O-7 AKA Ouatic-7
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 23:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice. I like how this is written. This story tugged my heart.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not sure how I came across your story, but glad I did. This was most excellent.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the hottest, most in-character IY/Kag story I've ever read. I'm really impressed and I love it alot, and even an alt. shipper like me can like a canon pairing every once in awhile, and this is one of those times. And your writing and grammar was impecable. So jealous of that too. XD
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: DreamBeamz [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think there should be more, but that's just because I enjoyed your story so much! :)
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Reviewed By: DarkAvenger On: May 30, 2005 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not only was it hot and sweet, but it was believable. i have added a link to your story to my website http://www.cadkitten.com I hope you don't mind. The sentence that affected me most had to be this one: " I'd never change him…how could she ever ask him to…" Thank you a thousand times for sharing this beaut of a story with us. ~Dark Avenger
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Reviewed By: Nokomarie the Snake On: May 30, 2005 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, never read this before. But now I have run my ink low printing it. Congradulations on you awards, you deserve them.
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Reviewed By: Luna Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 10:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Congratulations! Your story, Transitions, has been nomination for Best Lemon of the First Quarter of 2005 by the Inu Yasha Fanfiction Guild. To qualify for this honor, your story needs to have had a chapter posted during the first quarter of 2005, (Jan.1 through March 31), been recommended by one of our members and second by another. Voting will start May 15th, and the results will be announced on May 30th. If your story places among the top three, you can expect to here notification during the the following week. If you whish to see what other stories have been nominated, you can check out the current list of nominees at http://numisma.freewebsitehosting.com/1stQuarter2005.html. The Inu Yasha Fanfiction Guild is a Yahoo! Group dedicated to recognizing outstanding fanfiction for Rumiko Takahashi's Inu Yasha through quarterly and annual awards, and the creation and management of a fanfiction database to aid the discriminating reader in finding the best fanfiction. We have been awarding stories since 2002, and with almost 900 members, we rate stories in sixteen different categories. We welcome you to learn more of our group at: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/iyfanguild/ Be advised that you may receive more of these notices if your story was nominated for more than one category, or if more than one of your stories was nominated. Congratulations and good luck! Nena Moderator for IYFG
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Reviewed By: werewolfpixie On: May 11, 2005 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a great story. lemaon and situation very believable. doesn't bash kikyo to the point its upsurd. you keep inuyasha in character and kagome as sweet as always. keep up the good work and feel free to maybe turn this into a story. i would definitely read it.
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Title: Transitions
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 19:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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