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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: DreamBeamz [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think there should be more, but that's just because I enjoyed your story so much! :)
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Reviewed By: DarkAvenger On: May 30, 2005 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not only was it hot and sweet, but it was believable. i have added a link to your story to my website http://www.cadkitten.com I hope you don't mind. The sentence that affected me most had to be this one: " I'd never change him…how could she ever ask him to…" Thank you a thousand times for sharing this beaut of a story with us. ~Dark Avenger
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Reviewed By: Nokomarie the Snake On: May 30, 2005 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, never read this before. But now I have run my ink low printing it. Congradulations on you awards, you deserve them.
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Reviewed By: Luna Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 10:35 CDT
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Congratulations! Your story, Transitions, has been nomination for Best Lemon of the First Quarter of 2005 by the Inu Yasha Fanfiction Guild. To qualify for this honor, your story needs to have had a chapter posted during the first quarter of 2005, (Jan.1 through March 31), been recommended by one of our members and second by another. Voting will start May 15th, and the results will be announced on May 30th. If your story places among the top three, you can expect to here notification during the the following week. If you whish to see what other stories have been nominated, you can check out the current list of nominees at http://numisma.freewebsitehosting.com/1stQuarter2005.html. The Inu Yasha Fanfiction Guild is a Yahoo! Group dedicated to recognizing outstanding fanfiction for Rumiko Takahashi's Inu Yasha through quarterly and annual awards, and the creation and management of a fanfiction database to aid the discriminating reader in finding the best fanfiction. We have been awarding stories since 2002, and with almost 900 members, we rate stories in sixteen different categories. We welcome you to learn more of our group at: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/iyfanguild/ Be advised that you may receive more of these notices if your story was nominated for more than one category, or if more than one of your stories was nominated. Congratulations and good luck! Nena Moderator for IYFG
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Reviewed By: werewolfpixie On: May 11, 2005 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a great story. lemaon and situation very believable. doesn't bash kikyo to the point its upsurd. you keep inuyasha in character and kagome as sweet as always. keep up the good work and feel free to maybe turn this into a story. i would definitely read it.
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Title: Transitions
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 19:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Quillwing717 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it's VERY unusual for me to feel prompted to poke my shy little head out and write a review. But this one absolutely deserves it. Entertaining, believable, sizzling sexual tension, extremely well-written and paced, with near perfect grammar and usage. Hate to break it to you, but this comes nowhere near the PWP you named it. It's a high-quality fic that prompts me to give you the highest compliment I think any writer can get--you kept me glued to my seat, from beginning to end. Thanks for writing it. ~Quill
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Title: Top Show
Reviewed By: Mr. Amazed On: March 10, 2005 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My goodness, it's very good to see that someone has actually perfected the skill no one hardly ever uses anymore! That is, plot in a one-shot. Though I must say, I wish you would make a sequal, so that we could find out if, as w j said, they could stay together and tht it wouldn't be just a one time thing (And the fact that I really don't like Kikyo). Excellent job, if I don't say so myself!
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Reviewed By: Numisma-nsi On: February 23, 2005 00:51 CST
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dear GOD, woman. you know what? you are fucking EVIL. you owe me a new six-pack of PANTIES DAMNIT! it took me three fucking ours to read this, and goddamn if it wasn't worth every consonant, vowel, comma, and other random punctuational mark. damn you for writing such hot, lemony action. marry me?
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: January 18, 2005 02:12 CST
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WOW that was steamy and good but WAAAAA i still can't stand the heart break that Kikyou represents GRRRRRRRR evil woman. Ok so I'm a sucker for happy endings sue me. Great job. 'Orion
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Title: That was wonderful!
Reviewed By: Katina108 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 01:55 CST
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Wow! that is the best one shot I have ever read! I really do hope to see more from this, and get a happy-ever-after-story out of it, cause who doesn't love happy ever afters. You got a great gift for writing, I mean you really capture the essence of first time lovers ;) Wow, now um I need to go cool off for a bit.
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 00:52 CST
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wow, that's got to be one of the best one-shots i've ever read. and i've read a lot. i really enjoyed it. the way you included the holidays and how you created the characters of the inn keepers. great plot and analysis of inuyasha's and kagome's feelings. good job
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 20:43 CST
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Wow, this is wonderful. You are an excellent writer and I hope to read more from you soon. Perhaps a sequel with a they-can-stay-together-and-be-happy ending? Anyway, thanks for sharing this story with us. I really like it.
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Title: Oh. My.
Reviewed By: OhJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... that's what I call tasty. The tension, the awkwardness, InuYasha's possessiveness in front of Miroku. Blink. Blink. That was my favorite part. It was perfect as a one-shot. Thank you for sharing your work. I'm off to read 'Beast.' Ja ne! :) Joy
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 12:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty steamy! *whips out fan* I hope this is more than a won shot. It was nicely written. :)
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