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| "Chains" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Purple Ink [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2010 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha, the ending was funny! i know who it was! goku was the one who was tied up (Vegeta said the three syllables, my tail; Ka-ka-rot and since Vegeta was the first one i identified, who else could it be that had a tail?) and vegeta was the other guy (He took off his Gloves; vegeta is the only one that wears gloves, so that was a major clue) really worth reading, lemon:), really funny ending. better than what i come up with.
| Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very nice by the way. It's Goku/Kakarotto and Bejita. Many clues were given but the biggest on is on your profile where it clearly says Vegeta is uke. The line with the gloves was a dead giveways for Bejita having chained Goku to the bed and the tail sprouting and not knowing of the pleasure would indicate Goku as the one on the bed. I enjoyed it very much.
| Title: I know who it was!!!
Reviewed By: MysterySaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I KNOW WHO IT WAS!! IT WAS GOKU AND VEGETA!!! GOKU WAS THE CHAINED UP DUDE AND VEGETA WAS THE OTHER DUDE!!! I'M GOOD!!! i think thats who it was... any ways... GOOD STORY!!! ^^
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