| "I'm not stupid" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Animefreak20008 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting piece of work but what does this phrase mean in english:ARSCHLOCH! DU MUTTERFICKER! FIC DICH...LECKEN SIE MEINEN ESEL...DU WEIBCHEN!" Wow, Shuichi's smarter than me(well in this story). Jeez I've never felt like a moron until now that is; I only have an IQ of 122. Keep it up!!! Update asap!!!!
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Reviewed By: Twitch-6 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 18:06 CST
Comment/Review:
i really like the premise of this story and though you have some minor technical errors such a missing word here or a extra word there its certainly not enough to detract from your work. shuuichi does sound a bit OOC but given that he's in a coma and telling a story about wearing masks i can understand and accept it. all in all a god fic. my only disappointment is that it hasn't been updatd in so long. i'd like to see where the story leads and how you manage to end it. does yuki and the others ever find out that he's been taking E? What type of effects does it really have on Shuuichi and his writing as well as the rest of his life (i mean other then at the end withe whole collapsing in a coma)? i really hope you intend to finsih this fic. i con understand life getting in the way as i have a few stories stuck like that as well but knowing one way or the other what the plans are for the fic would be greatly appreciated. keep up the good work and i'm looking forward to seeing more of your work.
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Title: Amazing!!
Reviewed By: sutashii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutley amazing! I love this soooomuch! I cant wait to find out more of what happened! please dont just leave this here! Your doing a great job!
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Reviewed By: Drof On: April 26, 2005 21:01 CDT
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^^ Cool. Real good. Not one of those 'Stupid Shuichi' fics. ^^ I like these kinds, although I also like him all hyper...^^ Then again, Tohma's cool..Anyway, it's an awesome fic. I can't wait for the next chappie.
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Reviewed By: Deb-chan6 On: March 21, 2005 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Please continue...it's so good! I love the plot so much :D it's a smart plot. i love the fact that you're writing about Shuichi being really smart and stuff. ~Deb-chan6 ^_^
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: February 09, 2005 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is really good so far. Please keep going. I like the idea of Shuichi being smarter than he lets on.
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