"Ornamental" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Please add more... Reviewed By: violett407 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 13:05 CST Comment/Review: Please add more chapters! This has great potential!
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Reviewed By: sarahcant08 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 12:48 CST Comment/Review: ok you really should update...please
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Reviewed By: sarahcant08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 22:26 CDT Comment/Review: update please
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Title: GOD DAMN YOU! Reviewed By: The Faild Exaparament On: August 23, 2005 10:25 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WHY WONT YOU UPLOAD ANOTHER CHAPTER?!! IV BEEN WAITING FOR THREE WEEKS, WHAT TAKES YOU SO LONG?
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Reviewed By: vivi55 On: March 29, 2005 09:14 CST Comment/Review: oh wow, it's an original idea, although I don't like kagome in this ff, are you going to write a I/K fic? would be something new huh? well, go on anyway!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 16:35 CST Comment/Review: wow this is a very sad story so far but well written, and don't worry the number words are easy enough to uinderstand if you have a little common sense. :D n e ways update soon please. Zirra
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Title: morbidvortex Reviewed By: morbidvortex [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 15:11 CST Comment/Review: I love your story. i felt so sorry for kouga and inuyasha cause if i had to deal with her i would kill her. cant wait for you to update.
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Reviewed By: eo On: March 23, 2005 13:42 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: well, that was different. sorry, this was one of my first nc-17 stories i've read. good job tho. ;p
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Reviewed By: Gasert On: March 23, 2005 11:59 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Very good,you should write more. Poor them. Ah well,that is life. Please update your story!
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Reviewed By: Lillikyi_Wolf_Youkai On: February 11, 2005 11:43 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Wow!!! What a hot story. Please tell me that there are more chapters to come 'cause I think I'm going to cry if this is just a one shot! I love this story! It would be so unbelievably cool if you brought Sess into it too. *Wink, Wink, Nudge, Nudge* Anywaz, I love it!!! Keep writing!!! Oh, if you wanna read my stuff it's on fanfiction: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/698996/ Keep up the fantastic work!
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