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| "White Walls..." Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: O.O
Reviewed By: SolidNothing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 10:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You.... kick... arse. That was the most wicked thing I have read in the lonest time. But just a question since my computer has been dead for god knows how many months and I haven't been able to keep up on reading your stories under your old account: What happened to "Twitch Twitch"? That had the whole mentally abusive, frustrating, yet make you want to see things work out appeal to it. How many chapters did there end up being? Is there any chance you have them saved somewhere and could send me them? Erm.. yeah, I think that's all I have to say...
| Reviewed By: An old fan of yours On: January 11, 2005 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
-heartheartheart- I love this story! You've always entertained me with you style. Though this is creepy and angst, I myself wouldn't exactly horror. It was more...er...depressing. And those constant '...' pauses, they drove me nutters, they did. She's a little creepy, and I quite wonder why she was let out. But anyway. I love the ending line too. Nice work! As you always did in the past. -smiles-
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