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| "The defamation of recurrent entities." Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] | Reviewed By: shiver_ On: December 28, 2005 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, kiki. Whoa. You may want to calm down a little there. I honestly can't speak for burgundy@cutey.com, but I can kind of understand where he/she/it is coming from. The last few chapters finishing each of your yugioh fics, while I eagerly anticipated them, were nothing compared to the usual writing. I wouldn't say sweetdeily's writing has gone to hell, just the writing for the last few chapters of several of her yugioh fics. They feel rushed, hollow, written for the sake of finishing the fic and I can really feel that sweetdeily's lost her passion for the fandom. It just saddens me that she felt she had to rush out a subpar ending to each of them rather than leave them in their unfinished, unblemished state. I normally wouldn't have bothered reviewing; after all, I usually think it's best to say nothing if you have nothing nice to say, but I really feel disappointed in the rushed ending of so many formerly-wonderful fics.
| Title: I pity burgundy... while hoping they find the nearest hole and shove themselves in it
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (when I'm logged in) On: December 24, 2005 22:18 CST
Comment/Review:
I mean, really burgundy, you need to get a brain, a heart, or just, you know, leave us alone, mmkay crazy hater? Sweetdeily, do NOT listen to that odd child, they have NO bloody clue what they're talking about. I personally loved how Yugi was just "Hmm, I have no little voice and I'm thirsty" instead of "Oh bloody hell, I'm a fucking vamp. Shit. Where's the nearest stake, I don't think I can take eternal life in my super-hot lover's arms after having kinky vampire smex. I just don't think I can take that. 'Cause that would SO be hell on earth." I"m in love with your writing. ^_~ Don't let the occasional mental patient come and ruin your day. After all, we all know burgundy would kill to have your skill and fans. Eagerly awaiting your next update, Kiki (fullmetalguitar)
| Reviewed By: burgundy@cutey.com On: December 16, 2005 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, your writing has gone completely to hell.
| Reviewed By: Stella-chan On: September 30, 2005 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweetdeily-san.....WHERE IS THE REST OF IT!!!!!???
| Reviewed By: Red Dragon Of Egypt On: August 05, 2005 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
seriously Yami if u want to make Otogi pay do it right *grabs Otogi tightly by the neck slams him very hard into a wall then grabs her scimitars and slices into his petty flesh then grabs a huge barrel and container of acid and salt and poors every last drop on otogi's wounds to make him scream bloody murder then shes sends out hordes of locuts killer bees and scarabs to finish ripping his body to pieces them brings him back to life fully restored pain still fully there then with her scimitars chops off his hands and feet then grabs an AR assult Rifle fully loaded unlimited supply of bullets the fires it at point blank range till his heads so full of bullets its bursting with them then for her final touch revives him one last time douces him wish two kegs full of russian Vodka and two more kegs of fuel then leaves the room but not before droping a small lil match then teleports back to her castle and watches from her castle as the building she tortured Otogi in goes up in a massive pillar/mushroom cloud of smoke* there and thats how u torture them and im far from done *grabs Malik and Otogi brings them to her face and says in a low dark sinister voice* brace urselves boys cuz for every scrap of pain and agony you put that boy through im going to give it back a thousand times more severe and i wont rest till u BOTHE JOIN HIM IN UTTER INSANITY and THEN ILL SEE TO IT THAT U ROT IN HELL well authore gtg now update soon JA NE
| Title: Kenzie
Reviewed By: yami-shi-tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok that is so good! I waited for teh longest time for this to comes out and it has! well i didnt know there was to be a sequel but now there is and its good and here I thought only one person did all that stuff to yugi's parents! man oh man that was good!
| Title: *Nods*
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My vote is that you're both evil. But I'll be damned if that doesn't make for excellent writers. No real comments to make this time other than, I'll be staying tuned. Good Luck! P.S.: I normally wouldn't do the ratings this soon, but I'm on a comp that forces me to fill in all the fields to post a review.
| Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 11:55 CDT
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O_O Ryuji...filmed it...? He...? ...=_= Why that no good, evil, razzin' frazzin' little piece of filth! Ryuji...must...die! Horribly! At Yami's hands! Kill him good, Yami! *sighs* okay, I think my initial reaction is out of my system...nice little evil twist you brought up there. As usual, love your work, and hope to see more!
| Title: Love You!!!
Reviewed By: yami-shi-tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey continue IM happy you amade a sequel for a sequel...
| Reviewed By: underjoyed On: March 27, 2005 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...please please PLEASE update this fic soon. Or maybe Today is Purple. Or this one. I don't know, I just want more of your y/y fics!
| Reviewed By: Stella-chan On: March 19, 2005 11:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweetdeily-san, you ROCK!!!!I can't believe you wrote a sequel to my two most favorite stories of all time!!I loved your stories so much, I printed each and every page. I can't wait for the rest...But I do really want a happy ending for Yugi-chan and Yami-sama...Yugi-chan at least deserves on for what he has been put through, okay? Don't take to long updating, onegai, ne?
| Title: The Goddess Returns!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 19:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Yes, rampant imaginations can be a major pain. Now have you even experienced the fun of working on one of your fics, only to have your program crash and you end up losing everything you typed since the last time you saved? Sucks, no? More so when you have umpteen different ways to rewrite it. But I'll hush, 'cause I love ya. ^.^ Instead, I'll go with the showering you with "thank you"s for finally getting around to the plot-hole killer. Don't listen to your muses, the opening works, very reminiscent of classical vamp stories. Personally I think the POV thing isn't a real problem, as long as the story get told, right? Besides, having this one from Yami's POV makes sense, and gives a kind of book end feeling to the trilogy. In short, don't doubt what you've got here, it's better then you're giving yourself credit for.
| Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Med On: January 24, 2005 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love ur stories b4 now u did another sequel which is really good ^.^ lovin it so far. update soon please!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: other voices On: January 13, 2005 21:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Continue, please? ^_^
| Reviewed By: Cinna On: January 11, 2005 08:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mediaminer's been so messed up I didn't even see this fic until today. I really, really hope you'll update soon - I've always loved this series. ^_^
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