| "Death Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Spelling Errors
Reviewed By: Anime-Alee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 01:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I haven't yet begun to read but I'd like to clear something up. Hiei not Heie, Yuskia is wrong its Yusuke, and Kawmina or whatever you said is Koenma. Okay, now I shall finish reading ^.^ look forward to some good stuff
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Title: Spelling Errors
Reviewed By: Anime-Alee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 01:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
I haven't yet begun to read but I'd like to clear something up. Hiei not Heie, Yuskia is wrong its Yusuke, and Kawmina or whatever you said is Kuwabara. Okay, now I shall finish reading ^.^ look forward to some good stuff
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Reviewed By: aralynkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 16:12 CST
Comment/Review:
yusuke-kun's last name is spelled 'Urameshi', not urameshie. and the irish word is laddie, not ladie. good story, though
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Reviewed By: Blade99507 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 20:56 CST
Comment/Review:
ok i'm reviewing myself really quick to tell evey one that i was corrected on hiei or heie's name i've had two diff people tell me how to spell it so just bear with me and ignroe it
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Title: Heie?
Reviewed By: assgoblin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im going to gently correct you..... its Hiei, not Heie. Ok? but good story!
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Reviewed By: sisko66002 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 16:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Just so you know you really mispelled some of the names in you story. Yuskia= Yusuke Heie= Hiei Kawinma= Koenma Nice story but I think the misspelled names will throw a lot of people off.
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