| "To destroy the one you love" Reviews/Comments [ 107 ] |
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 18:52 CDT
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oh wow! How awful for Yohji. Are you going to have Schu eventually regret what he did? I sure hope so...regret what he did and lost in the process. I also hope you have Yohji getting the last laugh when it all washes out. You did a good job with this. It's understandable about being nervous posting a sex scene in a fic, especially when it's a non-con violent scene, but glad you finally did. Hope the next chap isn't far away cause I want to see the repercussions of it all.
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: June 23, 2005 23:06 CDT
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Woo hoo!! Well, I give credit to Schu for his patience. Had I been in his position, I'm not sure I would have waited so long, then again, I also have no need to rape anyone. Meh, I'll work on that (hope to hell not!). I think you did this very well. The scenes were not glorified, they were not all "oh i love you suddenly regardless of what you've done". It was rather, real. Not real in the bad sense, but real in it's honesty. Yojhi is being a lovely victim, and Schu is being alovely tormentor. Both play their parts well. I see no reason this chapter would be grrr-ed at. Yay!!! Go you!! ^_^ woo (Tygrrlyli of the too lazy to sign in)
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Reviewed By: Forsaken (too lazy to log on) On: June 23, 2005 20:37 CDT
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Wow. This chapter was utterly intense and so very hypnotic. You could just feel the fear Yohji was experiencing and the triumph Schu was relishing in as Yohji's world was changed irrevocably. Yes, it's tough writing NCS, but when it's well written the result is amazing, and I think this chapter is a testiment to that. Wonderful, wonderful job! ^^
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Reviewed By: zelda-13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it. idk y u were so scared of posting this. ive read worse. i think u did very well. not to graphic and not to lil of it. a good mix. plzz write more.... now i understand what u said about yojhi being screewed. or was that ran?? idk good chapter thou. plzz continue. dont make me cry and go chibi on u plzz it scares the others.
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Reviewed By: ShinigamiSeiji On: June 09, 2005 23:15 CDT
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This waiting is killing me. I need to know what happens. Does Omi kick Ran's ass? Hell for that matter does Aya-chan kick Ran's ass. I love seeing mad possesive Schuldig, when he's all "Yohji is mine".
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Reviewed By: bloodredroses1 On: June 09, 2005 08:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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AAARRRRRGGGGGGHHHHH!!!! I have just came to a full on dead stop at the end of chapter 13. *whimper* I would have read this in one straight sitting but I fell asleep @ the keyboard. At points I have nearly cried myself silly(aren't mood swings fun?). I truly am enjoying this enough that the pesky little internal editor I have when it comes to reading fan fiction has been quitely chewing on her red pencil as entranced as I am. Let me you if you can get HER to shut-up you are doing damn good! You've said you have atleast 15 chapters done & I am waiting with bated breath until you post more. I'm guessing that Schu is going to take from Youji what he so badly wants here in fairly short order but that can set up a situation so ripe for hurt/comfort when Ran does finally get him back. And I do so hope that Ran & Youji will be together in the end. I do believe, I do believe, I do, I do I do! *doing my best Cowardly Lion imatation* Omi's gonna kick Ran around for a bit & then they'll go off to the rescue. Right? Well I've rambled on & on for long enough. Thank you aging for writing this and more please as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 13:50 CDT
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Perfect drunk Ran I think. He probably would be rather bad at holding his liquor, since he doesn't drink often. Glad the guilt is finally catching up to him. He should be feeling like an absolute ass right now. And I'm glad Omi noticed the slip (to tell the truth, I didn't actually notice it). So yay, now that Omi's going to find out, something might actually be done toward saving poor Youji! I hope Youji-kun turns out okay; I love to write depressing endings, but I can't stand reading them myself. Write more!!
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Reviewed By: weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 08:59 CDT
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Excellant chapter. I knew someone would have to notice Ran's slip of the toungue during his rant to Aya-chan. Can't wait till the next chapter, Weiss to the rescue?? Keep up the great work. This is still one of my favorite fics. Ally
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Reviewed By: zelda-13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!! more i want more. plzzzzzzzzzzzzz ran is an interesting drunk. i love omi hes so smart and hes just a great character. Yojhi is going to get screwed huh? good i do pitty him thou. to be in schuldiges power is very bad wether u can see or not. more plzz. dont make me go chibi and cry on u.
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Title: very good
Reviewed By: firebard On: May 28, 2005 08:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it very much!
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Reviewed By: Trinity Bennett [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad that Omi is going to kick Ran in the pants and get things into motion. I love this style of writing. It's excellent to bring people into the emotions of the characters and put them into their world. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Each chapter is terrific. It looks like Ran has finally learned his lesson, and Schu as well -- but not the lesson either wished to learn. Hurray for Yohji's ability to forgive and strength. I suspect the evil side of Schuldig might be making an even stronger appearance now. Please hurry back soon.
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Reviewed By: zelda-13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it more plzz asap this is a great story. again poor yotan. he ios screwed up thoue. ayas still an ass but we cant blame him he didnt know and aya-chan is his sis.... what am i sayin he needs to be hit. *goes evil* muhahahahahahahahahaha im brad basicly. thats what my friends call me sometimes im very twisted. more plzzz
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Reviewed By: weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 09:07 CDT
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Ooh, I was so happy to see a posting this morning. I promise from now on to be a good little reviewer. Excellant chapter. I knew Shu's patience would run out soon (he is bad) and that Yoji would never agree to stay with him. Now you have me all nervous to see what Shu's going to do to his mind. AGHH!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kikvws On: May 13, 2005 08:26 CDT
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Excellent! Awesome fic, very dark, but hopeful at the same time. More puh-lease!
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