| "To destroy the one you love" Reviews/Comments [ 107 ] |
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Reviewed By: Trinity Bennett [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really didn't expect it to be Ran tearing after Yohji. But.. then again, it is for his sister. You capture his need to do anything for his sister well. Even if it is destorying his team... Keep up the good writing.
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Title: Need More
Reviewed By: weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 11:45 CST
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Wow, you just have to keep going. Looks like it's going to be pretty good. If I must I will get on all fours and beg (i am not above it) :-) Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 06:54 CST
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Wow, much work to be done. Too much, and I hate kids. You can have it...her him, whatever. ^_^ Okay, so wow...Ran asshole much. This is just getting to be a cooler and cooler fic! I mean, Schu and Ran and then poor little Yohji over in the corner there and I can't wait to see what happens!! Children are no where near as important as this fic!! Make more fic happen ^_^
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Reviewed By: Forsaken (too tired to log on) On: February 08, 2005 06:40 CST
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Yet another entertaining chapter. The angst level is elevating between Yohji and Aya - Aya proving to be more of a frustrating fool than I though possible - and Yohji's pain is becoming more and more tangible as the story progresses. I truly feel sorry for him. Of course, that doesn't diminish my feelings of elation and anticipation. *grins wickedly* Keep up the great work. And in regards to CoT... Thanks for the luck. I really appreciate it. Maybe the muse will become merciful soon and allow me to work on it once again. ^^ Again, good luck. Til next time....
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Reviewed By: Trinity Bennett [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 22:49 CST
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This is just.. wow. I love it. Yohji is wonderfully himself and Aya's being a stupid prick. It fits. I can't wait to read the next part.
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Reviewed By: Harmony Glory On: February 07, 2005 06:17 CST
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What a wonderful chapter! I really wanted to kick Aya's butt in this one, and I felt so badly for Yohji having to put up with his love's harsh attitude after having such a rough day. Too bad that things are only going to get worst - well, not really since I'm actually looking forward to more angst. *giggles* The more the better. And of course I'm going to stick by you - great authors always deserve to be coddled by their fans. ^^ Good luck with the next one!
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Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 12:53 CST
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Wow... I love Shu's thought processes in the first chapter. They're so well written and still very much like Schu would think (I think). Please continue soon. I don't find many well written fanfics like this, and when I do the authors always seem to get tired of them.
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Reviewed By: Forsaken (too tired to log in) On: February 04, 2005 14:47 CST
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I am enjoying this very much. I'm an adamant Yohji fan so seeing him as the center of attention in this fic is just wonderful. I feel so sorry for him, loving Aya, trying to get Aya to see past his playboy image, so clueless as to what's about to happen to him. And Schu... So bad and conniving. You just have to admire the man for his determination. Aya... what's to say. He's a moron, one that will eventually make a mistake he will come to regret. Yep, a moron. ^^ I'll definitely be waiting for more of this fic. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 07:19 CST
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Yes, fine, you can have visiting rights....as long as you continue to write this fic! This is such a cool chapter and Aya is such a great asshole, as is Schu. But in different and unique ways. Poor poor Yohji. It's so hard being sexy and adored ^_^ Update as soon as life/muses/whatever allows ^_^
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Reviewed By: Harmony Glory On: February 04, 2005 06:42 CST
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I'm really enjoying this. Poor Yohji. He has no idea how badly he's going to be betrayed. I'm soooo looking forward to the moment of realization. It's obvious that Ran has issues with Yohji, but, like ch1 revealed in the very beginning, even those issues aren't going to be enough to erase the guilt that will soon grab a hold of him. Schuldich is so wicked, planning carefully in order to obtain Yohji. You just have to love and hate him. Can't wait til the next chappy. Good luck! I'm impatiently waiting for more. ^.~
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 15:26 CST
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Holy crap, you mean one of my decrees worked?! I mean...of course my decree worked ~_^ Anyway, thank you so much for writing more. But now I must tell you the terrible secret I have kept from you, A) I'm carrying your baby and B) I am insatiable to awesome writing. Since your writing is awesome, my insatiable-ness calls for more of this fic to be written. It's a vicious cycle, really. Okay, now...write! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Harmony Glory On: January 27, 2005 01:36 CST
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Hmm.. You've got me intrigued. Since Yohji is my fav WK kitty, I'm definitely becoming very curious, wondering what's going on. Hopefully, the next chapter will continue to shed some light. Good luck with the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Celace On: January 11, 2005 22:44 CST
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Please say that you will write more soon. I look forward to reading it and I love the way you make Schuldig so human, albeit a little selfish,but I love him like that.
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 16:14 CST
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Finally! Mediaminer is recognizing that I am in fact a member and can write a review. Sorry ...heh. Anyway, this ROCKS and you WILL write more. I'm sorry, but it has been decreed and the decree must be followed. That's just the way it is. Okay, and no it wasn't confusing to me at least. I knew it was Schu and got that point maybe 1/5th into the fic. so yes, please do continue. Keep up the great writing ^_^
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Reviewed By: potatofreak [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 16:12 CST
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i like the way you write (like poetry). More please?
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