| "To destroy the one you love" Reviews/Comments [ 107 ] |
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Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 10:55 CST
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Oh my-my-my! i can't believe Ay- urm Ran would do something like that to Yohji! *Places head in hands and sighs* I know that he is cold but.... gosh! Now that Schwartz has Yotan.... is Ran going to confess that he is still alive? *pacing around nervous* When is Ay- I mean Ran going to figure out that he is in love with Yohji? Oh I hope Yohji is going to be alright. Keep up the good writing can't wait till the next chapter is out!!! -MangaChild420
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Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 14:59 CST
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Poor Yotan! And stupid Ran for not realizing his feelings. I'm thinking since Aya-chan knows how Youji feels about her brother, she'll say something to Ran (and hopefully he'll realize how big of an idiot he was/is.) Now I understand why he had to destroy Seven though, becuase they had to believe Youji was dead in order not to look for them (I know, that was in Aya's thought processes an earlier chapter. I just forgot). But, yay for Schu! I mean not yay for the fact he's going to torture (is that the right word?) Youji, but yay on his excellent characterization (and he's my favorite Schwartz...even though Nagi and Farf are pretty close too). And yay Farf!! Is Nagi going to be around at all? I can't stand the suspense. When will Youji find out what Ran did, and will he forgive him for it? And when will Aya come to terms with his feelings?
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Reviewed By: weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 11:17 CST
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Love it. Can't wait to read Chepter 8, but may I ask what happened to Chapter 7 :-). Keep up the great work. Serioulsy you rock.
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know how Yohji's gonna ever be able to forgive Aya for the betrayal, for the loss of seven, and for what he's surely gonna experience at the hands of Schu. Don't see how Aya's going to be able to make it up to him ever *sniff sniff* Poor Yohji...and poor Aya too. Good job so far!
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Reviewed By: Forsaken (too tired to log in) On: February 23, 2005 14:37 CST
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Jeesh, I almost missed this one! As usual, you've provided us with a very entertaining installment, one that leaves me wondering how the heck Aya's going to make up for what he's done. I would've guessed the depths he'd go to. Poor, poor Yotan. How he was betrayed. I can only imagine how he'll feel once he realizes what Aya has done. I'll be looking forward to more of Schu as well. Dwelling in his mind is so much fun sometimes. ^^ Good luck with the next one!
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Reviewed By: Harmony Glory On: February 22, 2005 21:23 CST
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So the true angst begins... Yay! *beams* I can't wait to see what's going to happen now that Aya has finally done the evil deed and handed Yohji over to Schuldig. I'll be looking forward to Yohji's POV for sure, especially if Schuldig ever reveals Aya's betrayal to him. *sniffles* Poor Yohji. Good luck with the next chappy!
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: February 22, 2005 01:04 CST
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grrr stupid ran and aya i hate you ! even though rans hot hes a butthole ! poor yohji ! and poor shu having a onesided love!
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Reviewed By: weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 10:51 CST
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Sniff Sniff OK :-) still love the story though!
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Reviewed By: darkfedora On: February 21, 2005 08:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that really sparkled! Good job.
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Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 12:21 CST
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Poor, poor Seven! Gee, Youji's going to be so upset about the loss of that car... Or maybe he'll be in a different situation, and be worried about something else. And Aya (sorry, Ran) is kind of viscious in this story (of course, Aya-chan is in danger, so it is still very in character). I like your writing style very much, and I hope the updates keep coming soon. I'm on edge to see what happens to poor Youji and when/if Ran actually regrets and starts to care, because right now it's all just possible twinges.
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Reviewed By: dita chan On: February 18, 2005 23:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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honestly aya.. if you don't want Youji.. give him to me!!! isk Really feel like bashing aya's head. Can't wait for next chappie :)
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Reviewed By: weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 08:07 CST
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AGGHH, your chapters are so short..leaves me jonesing for more. :-) Can't wait to see how you keep Yoji unconscious until the transfer, or does he find out Aya is going to betray him...love the angst. Keep up the good work. Ally
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Reviewed By: darkfedora On: February 17, 2005 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That read very nicely. Am looking forward to more parts!
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Reviewed By: Harmony Glory On: February 17, 2005 20:29 CST
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Man! Can Aya get any worst? No, don't tell me. I just know he is (you're too good of a writer to make it easy on us...or Yohji, right? *grins). Poor Yotan - Not! ^_^ Can't wait to see the next chappy. Good luck. I'll be waiting for the next one. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Forsaken (too tired to log in) On: February 17, 2005 20:20 CST
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*drops her head onto her hand* There's just no word to describe Aya in this one. You did a marvelous job in getting me to totally want to sucker punch him. Poor, poor Yohji. Not only soon to be betrayed by his love but also injured by the fool; he even lost Seven. *sighs* I can see what you mean about Aya getting worst before he gets better - Idiot. Keep up the excellent work - as always. ^^ I'll be looking forward to the next one. Will Schu Schu make yet another appearance? Should get interesting. Til next time...
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