| "MAGIC KNIGHT RAYEARTH: A Different Person" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: SnowyBlackOwl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 15:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Intense!
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: SnowyBlackOwl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 15:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, wow! What a way to introduce Lantis! Good job with it!
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Title: -~Chapter One Review~-
Reviewed By: SnowyBlackOwl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 00:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, from reading it, I've noticed at least one mistake you've got: "The voice!" she said. "It is the same voice in the Sky Shrine when I donned my Rune-God!" She really didn't don it at that time, so this is quite a bit off. Otherwise, still interesting and good to my tastes.
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Title: --Prologue Review--
Reviewed By: SnowyBlackOwl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 00:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, I've just finished watching that episode on DVD, so I guess it would make sense; Zagato WAS quite reluctant into letting Innouva revert back to his true form. I find it interesting. Really interesting.
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