| "Soliloquies" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 10:45 CDT
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this was soo funny! love sick yotan and paranoid aya, convinced that the nut was out to get him...
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Title: ::evil laugh::
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been pacing myself, since this was the last of your fics I hadn't read...ah well. Now I can nag more enthusiastically about the unfinished ones. ::grin:: Loved it!! Especially Yohji falling ever farther while Aya waits for the murder attempt. OMG, I was snickering so hard! Is this one older than the others, though? I noticed the grammar problems more than I have before. You might try reading your stuff out loud. Lots of people "hear" grammar better than they see it. I do love that your fics are like NO others!
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Title: Yohji got him...
Reviewed By: LoveyouHateyou On: July 15, 2005 07:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, persistency does pay off, so does recklessness and an unsatiable hunger for life. I think that's why Yohji does get (to) Aya who tends to tether at the edge of death way too often and too habitually. I love the way you show the different viewpoints, and Omi and Ken's reactions are great. None of them comes across as wimpy (as they do in many other fanfics)or girly (urgh...). Great. It's one of my favourites. Cheers LH
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Title: Aya going paranoid...
Reviewed By: LoveyouHateyou On: July 15, 2005 05:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is funny to see HIM getting a bit unhinged and actually have twinges of what - fear? Hah! Only because Yohji's being nosy... Aya with a tingling of paranoia is just superb. And Yohji... well, he cannot help it, he's just being himself. This is great fun to read. Cheers LH
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Title: Just Yohji...
Reviewed By: LoveyouHateyou On: July 13, 2005 06:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, another one about Yohji as he lives and breathes. You show him full of life, brutally honest with himself, determined to hang on and still confused... simply great. I hate them wussy, and they are not wussy at all in your fics! I like the way your writing flows, nice 'n easy. So thanks for another good piece here. Cheers LH
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Title: great story :-)
Reviewed By: Ranmaru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWWW, I love this story. I really do. Usually I do not read stories with different POVs but this one is so well done, you had me hooked since the first chapter. It is hilarious and leaves me laughing out loud. I hope that my neighbours do not think that I went crazy . *lol* Can`t wait to read the next chapter. Great writing.
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Title: LMAO
Reviewed By: Mikiya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 15:01 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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My favourite part in this chapter was how Ken finally figured out what's happening between Ran (sorry, AYA!!!) and Yoji... I just looove his logic! LOL At least I can see why you like this pairing, I do have to admit, that Yoji and Ran definitely look veeeeery adorable together... Yes, you've convinced me, this pairing definitely works!!! Good work, keep going!! I really like this story!!
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Title: :) yay! an update!
Reviewed By: me On: February 03, 2005 17:16 CST
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i think this story is really cute, though i prefer to read from Aya or Yohji's POV - but what happened to Aya thinking Yohji was trying to kill him? why is he suddenly so cozy? is this part of his plan to expose Yohji's evil plan?
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Reviewed By: mneme On: February 03, 2005 06:49 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is funny and lovely and really criative (which is rare)and I'm so curious about how this will develop...Please, keep updating.
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Reviewed By: Greywing On: January 21, 2005 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAARRGGGHHH!!! Dont leave me hanging in here!!!I want more!!! Seriously, this fic is turning out very well, haven´t enjoyed a weiss fic like i´m enjoying this one in a while. I really like your writing style and i hope to see more chapters of this story really soon ;)
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such fun! The ice cream scene was priceless, and the divergence in their thoughts a delightful twist on their known personalities. Please, keep it coming!
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Title: Please don't stop!
Reviewed By: Mikiya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 03:45 CST
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I really love this fiction, so please don't stop! Aya/Yoji isn't my favourite pairing, but you've actually managed to persuade me to read this story nevertheless! I really enjoy your style of writing because I think writing an interesting 1st-person-pov story is very difficult, many authors don't manage to keep the characters in character when they do that, but you do, so this should tell you how much I like that!!! :) About how to continue: I guess that you have got to come up with a situation where either one of them will be able to give the other a hint of his feelings for him. Maybe Ran surprises Yoji on one of his 'tours' through his room, or, even more funnier, the other way round, Yoji sees Aya snooping through his room or something like that... ;) I love the way how paranoid-Aya thinks Yoji wants to kill him and tries to evade that by swiping their cups, that was my favourite scene so far... *still sniggering* Anyhow, please don't stop writing, this story is way too good to be left without a (happy) ending, I am soooo curious about who is going to make the first move!!
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Title: this is fun!
Reviewed By: me On: January 09, 2005 18:42 CST
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i love that aya thinks yohji is plotting to kill him - that's so aya :) this is really cute and funny and i am really enjoying it i see nothing wrong with short chapters - as long as updates are frequent :) more please !
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very much enjoying this story. It is one of the very few that I've found to be laughing out loud funny. That is a difficult thing to do, especially without really losing the integrity of the characters as they were depicted in the anime. Well done, and please come back with more soon.
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